What are the benefits of living in big cities, as opposed to rural areas? What are the problems of rural areas and how can they be solved?
It is a highly debatable issue that people should live in big cities or in a rural area. This is essay is going to deliver you necessary arguments with regards to above topic before reaching a conclusion.
There is an abundance of opportunities for living in the city area. To begin with the positive note, in the city one can have better conveniences in terms of education, employment, and transportation. Further, medical, entertainment amenities, well-developed infrastructure, and living with latest trends are other reasons for living in cities. In addition, people with very high income and poor also can access the all the services as well as government benefits easily. For instance, access to a government hospital, school.
On the flip side, there are countless difficulties evolves when we pick to live in rural area. Firstly, rural citizens are very middle-of-the-road and they not only restrict their lives but also do not allow other people to live their life with liberty. Next, there is a scarcity of focal facilities such as a hospital, schools, employment in countryside areas.
Apparently, the problems of rural areas can be solved if younger generation educates the elder. They should tell them about the recent improvements. Slowly and gradually, it will change the attitude of the older generation. Besides this, the government can introduce more expansion in the villages, so the people do not have to look up to the cities for fulfilling their supplies.
To sum up with this, Residing in urban or rural life comes up with its own set of benefits and drawbacks; however, the problems can be curbed with a little bit of optimism.But, I believe that living in cities is more beneficial.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Suggestion: with the latest
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...ever, the problems can be curbed with a little bit of optimism.But, I believe that living ...
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Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: But
...be curbed with a little bit of optimism.But, I believe that living in cities is mor...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, apparently, besides, but, first, firstly, however, if, look, so, well, for instance, in addition, such as, as well as, to begin with, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 10.5418719212 104% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 6.10837438424 131% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 8.36945812808 108% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 5.94088669951 50% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 17.0 20.9802955665 81% => OK
Preposition: 45.0 31.9359605911 141% => OK
Nominalization: 12.0 5.75862068966 208% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1432.0 1207.87684729 119% => OK
No of words: 282.0 242.827586207 116% => OK
Chars per words: 5.0780141844 5.00649968141 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.09790868904 3.92707691288 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.02207561106 2.71678728327 111% => OK
Unique words: 163.0 139.433497537 117% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.578014184397 0.580463131201 100% => OK
syllable_count: 457.2 379.143842365 121% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.57093596059 102% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 4.6157635468 108% => OK
Article: 3.0 1.56157635468 192% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.71428571429 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 2.0 0.931034482759 215% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 6.0 3.65517241379 164% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 12.6551724138 119% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.5024630542 88% => OK
Sentence length SD: 45.2515929738 50.4703680194 90% => OK
Chars per sentence: 95.4666666667 104.977214359 91% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.8 20.9669160288 90% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.93333333333 7.25397266985 137% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.12807881773 121% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.33497536946 56% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 6.9802955665 100% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 2.75862068966 109% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 2.91625615764 171% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.281559073171 0.242375264174 116% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.094410229959 0.0925447433944 102% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.10025655971 0.071462118173 140% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.155817035521 0.151781067708 103% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0276076230226 0.0609392437508 45% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.9 12.6369458128 94% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 53.21 53.1260098522 100% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.54236453202 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 10.9458128079 94% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.18 11.5310837438 106% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.95 8.32886699507 107% => OK
difficult_words: 79.0 55.0591133005 143% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 9.94827586207 90% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.3980295567 88% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.5123152709 86% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 80.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 72.0 Out of 90
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