What are the pros and cons of extreme sports?

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What are the pros and cons of extreme sports?

Sports are very beneficial for human, because from birth to death human remains connected with sports and there are many types of sports are available in the world. Likewise many people participate in the extreme sports, so i will discuss its merits and demerits in upcoming paragraphs.
To begin with, some people are interested in the extreme sports and they enjoy by watching it, that's why these become very popular. Moreover, extreme sports are source of income for players, because they can earn good, due to which they also can live luxurious life. Furthermore, participants will get name and fame and good opportunities of government jobs and travelling one place to another place. After that, when people of other countries come for watching the that sports, then it increase the economy country.
On the flip side, but some people think extreme sports are dangerous of players, for example in the car racing when players drive the cars at the high speed, they can be injured even die die due to accident, even these types of races are dangerous for viewers, who stay on the both sides of the road. Besides this, visitors will influence on the natives, when they come in their home towns for watching these sports like cultural effects. After that, extreme sports are very expensive, which cannot afford poor people.
In conclusion, every coin has two sides, likewise this topic also has mixed bag. But my opinion is players should take about some precautions, while they are included in the extreme sports.

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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, but, furthermore, if, likewise, moreover, so, then, while, for example, in conclusion, to begin with

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 10.5418719212 104% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 6.10837438424 131% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 8.36945812808 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 5.94088669951 151% => OK
Pronoun: 20.0 20.9802955665 95% => OK
Preposition: 33.0 31.9359605911 103% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 5.75862068966 35% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1266.0 1207.87684729 105% => OK
No of words: 255.0 242.827586207 105% => OK
Chars per words: 4.96470588235 5.00649968141 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.99608801488 3.92707691288 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.34969056508 2.71678728327 86% => OK
Unique words: 154.0 139.433497537 110% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.603921568627 0.580463131201 104% => OK
syllable_count: 392.4 379.143842365 103% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.57093596059 95% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 4.6157635468 22% => OK
Article: 0.0 1.56157635468 0% => OK
Subordination: 7.0 1.71428571429 408% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 2.0 0.931034482759 215% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 6.0 3.65517241379 164% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 12.6551724138 87% => OK
Sentence length: 23.0 20.5024630542 112% => OK
Sentence length SD: 56.8496640053 50.4703680194 113% => OK
Chars per sentence: 115.090909091 104.977214359 110% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.1818181818 20.9669160288 111% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.4545454545 7.25397266985 144% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.33497536946 94% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 6.9802955665 100% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 2.75862068966 72% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 2.91625615764 69% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.175895608326 0.242375264174 73% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0725999143921 0.0925447433944 78% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0554731888707 0.071462118173 78% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.112650942518 0.151781067708 74% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0415837318074 0.0609392437508 68% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.5 12.6369458128 107% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 56.59 53.1260098522 107% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.54236453202 47% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 10.9458128079 101% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.78 11.5310837438 102% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.0 8.32886699507 96% => OK
difficult_words: 52.0 55.0591133005 94% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.94827586207 111% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.3980295567 108% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.5123152709 114% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 85.5555555556 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 77.0 Out of 90
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