Nowadays, computer is an essential part of our day to day life. While, some people argue that use ofcomputers make people unproductive, I strongly believe that computers plays an important role inincreasing quality of life of an individuals. My argument is explained further.
Firstly, One of the most fundamental argument I will bring forth is, with the help of computers lot of things arevery easy to access which was a dream at one time. For example, Computer is capable of handle complexcalculations with the use of spreadsheets within a fraction of seconds which can take number of days, ifdone manually. Further, it also proves very helpful in handling large files which in turn will help us toincrease our productivity in workplaces.The other reason to support my view is that with the help of technology, computer is used in almost allaspects of life starting from security to medical sciences. For instance, in several malls, to reduce thefts,we see cctv surveillance in place which is closely monitored using computer by hardly two or threemembers instead of large group of security personals.
Finnaly, it is statistically proved on the basis of surveythat appearance and use of computers proves very beneficial in medical sciences by keeping number ofrecords in one folder, which helps doctor's to evaluate patients in very less time. Information sharing has been made much easier due to the existence of computers. Computers enable access to emails, social networks and video sharing platforms, which easily allows us to send out and receive information. This has made learning easier and has also enabled us to find out what is happening around the world. For example, we are able to access and read global news through the internet wherever we are.
Handling tasks at our jobs have also become more organized as we can create, store and retrieve data with ease. The calculation and the storing of data can be done accurately by computers, allowing us to focus on solving bigger problems and not worry about the minor details which can be automated such as calculations and memorizing. This has also ensured that the work is done correctly and efficiently.
In conclustion, Computer is the greatest invention in the world in the 20thCentury. It was invented tomake human productive to increase and make them to work happiest ways. Its inarguable topic currently by many other whether computer are really good forhuman. In my point of view I’m going to support 1stargument, which computers arehelping human to make them happy and smarter.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 227, Rule ID: A_PLURAL[1]
Message: Don't use indefinite articles with plural words. Did you mean 'an individual' or simply 'individuals'?
Suggestion: an individual; individuals
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Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: The
...increase our productivity in workplaces.The other reason to support my view is that...
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Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , we
...ance, in several malls, to reduce thefts,we see cctv surveillance in place which is...
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Line 9, column 208, Rule ID: MANY_NN[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun other seems to be countable; consider using: 'many others'.
Suggestion: many others
...ways. Its inarguable topic currently by many other whether computer are really good forhum...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, firstly, if, really, second, so, while, for example, for instance, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 19.0 10.5418719212 180% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 6.10837438424 98% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 8.36945812808 155% => OK
Relative clauses : 12.0 5.94088669951 202% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 29.0 20.9802955665 138% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 67.0 31.9359605911 210% => Less preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 13.0 5.75862068966 226% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2151.0 1207.87684729 178% => OK
No of words: 417.0 242.827586207 172% => Less content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.15827338129 5.00649968141 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.5189133491 3.92707691288 115% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.91115641034 2.71678728327 107% => OK
Unique words: 243.0 139.433497537 174% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.58273381295 0.580463131201 100% => OK
syllable_count: 679.5 379.143842365 179% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.57093596059 102% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 4.6157635468 217% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 2.0 1.56157635468 128% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.71428571429 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.931034482759 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 3.65517241379 137% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 19.0 12.6551724138 150% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.5024630542 102% => OK
Sentence length SD: 66.7919413919 50.4703680194 132% => OK
Chars per sentence: 113.210526316 104.977214359 108% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.9473684211 20.9669160288 105% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.57894736842 7.25397266985 63% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.12807881773 121% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.33497536946 75% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 16.0 6.9802955665 229% => Less positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 2.75862068966 36% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 2.91625615764 69% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.169975414386 0.242375264174 70% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0499175129357 0.0925447433944 54% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0340376619131 0.071462118173 48% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0914806401575 0.151781067708 60% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0441969564535 0.0609392437508 73% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.8 12.6369458128 109% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 50.16 53.1260098522 94% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.54236453202 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 10.9458128079 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.65 11.5310837438 110% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.41 8.32886699507 113% => OK
difficult_words: 125.0 55.0591133005 227% => Less difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.94827586207 116% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.3980295567 100% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.5123152709 114% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 77.7777777778 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 70.0 Out of 90
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