Whether design of buildings will have a positive or negative impact on people’s life and work?
These days there has been a colossal upsurge in design of building whether it is a positive impact or negative on people’s work and life. Some people believe that having an apropos design is always a positive impact while other argue that it is a negative impact on people’s life and work. This essay will discuss how a good design is always upsurge outcome on people’s lifestyle and work.
A good design is a pleasant and greener place of environment. People working in this structure are always healthy/active during work side and more over positive outcomes to the company. For example, in our city many large companies/buildings have appropriate design for which people working in that atmosphere are active and enjoy work at all time. Clearly, having an outdo in design of the buildings is always the merits on the life and people they work in this vicinity.
Moreover, a good design is always considered with all sorts of safety and ventilated system provided with many windows surroundings for clean intake of sunlight and air which maintain healthy atmosphere. For example, a google company where thousands of employers are working in this environment system are always benefited of getting fresh intake air and vitamin-d because of this their heath is benefited.
This essay has discussed how people’s life and work together gained from having a good and apropos design. In my opinion it is always outstanding and preponderant facets to work in a design building which alleviate from work pressure and maintains the long life expectancy.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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...enjoy work at all time. Clearly, having an outdo in design of the buildings is always th...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, moreover, so, while, for example, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 10.5418719212 133% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 6.10837438424 33% => OK
Conjunction : 17.0 8.36945812808 203% => Less conjunction wanted
Relative clauses : 7.0 5.94088669951 118% => OK
Pronoun: 17.0 20.9802955665 81% => OK
Preposition: 33.0 31.9359605911 103% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 5.75862068966 35% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1410.0 1207.87684729 117% => OK
No of words: 272.0 242.827586207 112% => OK
Chars per words: 5.18382352941 5.00649968141 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.06108636974 3.92707691288 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.91183897707 2.71678728327 107% => OK
Unique words: 130.0 139.433497537 93% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.477941176471 0.580463131201 82% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 444.6 379.143842365 117% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.57093596059 102% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 4.6157635468 65% => OK
Article: 3.0 1.56157635468 192% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.71428571429 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.931034482759 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 3.65517241379 55% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 12.6551724138 95% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 20.5024630542 107% => OK
Sentence length SD: 40.6249786325 50.4703680194 80% => OK
Chars per sentence: 117.5 104.977214359 112% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.6666666667 20.9669160288 108% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.25 7.25397266985 59% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.12807881773 121% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.33497536946 75% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 6.9802955665 129% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 2.75862068966 109% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 2.91625615764 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.60772265446 0.242375264174 251% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.303815136772 0.0925447433944 328% => Sentence topic similarity is high.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.268926963348 0.071462118173 376% => The coherence between sentences is low.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.478032778402 0.151781067708 315% => Maybe some contents are duplicated.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.332136069925 0.0609392437508 545% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.3 12.6369458128 113% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 49.15 53.1260098522 93% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.54236453202 47% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 10.9458128079 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.06 11.5310837438 113% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.21 8.32886699507 99% => OK
difficult_words: 60.0 55.0591133005 109% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 9.94827586207 75% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.3980295567 104% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.5123152709 105% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 55.5555555556 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 50.0 Out of 90
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