Whether design of buildings will have a positive or negative impact on people’s life and work?
Recently, the phenomenon of how designing of buildings will impact people's life and work has sparked a heated debate. Although contest by many that the matter of building designs and its positive or negative impacts on human's life is highly important, such issue is regarded throughout both positive and constructive by a substantial number of individuals. I reckon that buildings should be designed in such moderate ways to ease the mankind's lifestyle and I will analyze that throughout this essay.
Firstly, buildings should accommodate all the important amenities like lift, water supply system, 24 hours power supply, ventilation for fresh air as well as way for sunlight. Moreover, these are the mandatory things to live life happily as this impacts human's behavior and also help to reduce stress and make positive impact on person's mood. For example, If a skyscraper building does not have lift, then climbing up and down for daily work can end-up person frustrating.
Secondly, moderate designs offers less expensive life style comparatively high tech buildings. Thus, even middle class person can afford the home or apartment rather than waiting for life time to manage budget. For example, these day, due to the expensive flats, people feel demoralized as for them it is hard to collect big amount.
To recapitulate, while there are compelling arguments on building dressings, I profoundly believe that making building to facilitate all the essential facilities fortify people’s daily problems but the same can increase the lifestyle cost. Hence, it is recommended to build such projects who can accommodate maximum facilities and focus less on look and feel of the buildings in order to minimize the living cost.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 220, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[1]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'humans'' or 'human's'?
Suggestion: humans'; human's
...and its positive or negative impacts on humans life is highly important, such issue is...
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Line 2, column 329, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[2]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'persons'' or 'person's'?
Suggestion: persons'; person's
...duce stress and make positive impact on persons mood. For example, If a skyscraper buil...
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Line 3, column 183, Rule ID: LIFE_TIME[1]
Message: Did you mean 'lifetime'?
Suggestion: lifetime
...me or apartment rather than waiting for life time to manage budget. For example, these da...
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Line 3, column 224, Rule ID: THIS_NNS[2]
Message: Did you mean 'this day' or 'these days'?
Suggestion: this day; these days
...ife time to manage budget. For example, these day, due to the expensive flats, people fee...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, hence, if, look, moreover, second, secondly, so, then, thus, well, while, as for, for example, i reckon, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 10.5418719212 66% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 6.10837438424 131% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 8.36945812808 143% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 5.94088669951 84% => OK
Pronoun: 15.0 20.9802955665 71% => OK
Preposition: 29.0 31.9359605911 91% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 5.75862068966 35% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1456.0 1207.87684729 121% => OK
No of words: 275.0 242.827586207 113% => OK
Chars per words: 5.29454545455 5.00649968141 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.07223819929 3.92707691288 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.78472812745 2.71678728327 103% => OK
Unique words: 176.0 139.433497537 126% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.64 0.580463131201 110% => OK
syllable_count: 453.6 379.143842365 120% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.57093596059 102% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 4.6157635468 108% => OK
Article: 1.0 1.56157635468 64% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 1.71428571429 175% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.931034482759 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 3.65517241379 27% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 12.6551724138 87% => OK
Sentence length: 25.0 20.5024630542 122% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 47.1107364366 50.4703680194 93% => OK
Chars per sentence: 132.363636364 104.977214359 126% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.0 20.9669160288 119% => OK
Discourse Markers: 12.9090909091 7.25397266985 178% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.33497536946 75% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 6.9802955665 86% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 2.75862068966 72% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 2.91625615764 103% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.362585968699 0.242375264174 150% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.127789433115 0.0925447433944 138% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.103644341826 0.071462118173 145% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.194078920578 0.151781067708 128% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.126000145637 0.0609392437508 207% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.0 12.6369458128 127% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 46.1 53.1260098522 87% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.54236453202 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.0 10.9458128079 119% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.7 11.5310837438 119% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.36 8.32886699507 112% => OK
difficult_words: 78.0 55.0591133005 142% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 9.94827586207 141% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 10.3980295567 115% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.5123152709 133% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 77.7777777778 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 70.0 Out of 90
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.