Communication is the ways we make sense of experience
Communication exists within us. We wonder for centuries why only human can speak, and we share knowledge because of that. This essay is attending to answer such question.
Speak is a process for gaining knowledge. People share experience when they speak without experiencing directly. Firstly, communication with words can be directly processing by brain to make sense experience. For example, when person talks about his experience such as, he gets car accident. People who hear the story can feel what speaker says.
Moreover, communication is sometimes not refers to the world, but humans can still understand. For instance, when person says about fairy tales, he can understand and imagine the stories. Furthermore, speak as communication makes coordination easy within a group. For instance, captain player at football game can speak loudly to make other player move or rearrange position.
However, Speaking sometimes fails to deliver a message. Firstly, humans not only use words to send a message, they use another signal like body language. For example, president of Indonesia uses hand and mimics in his face for deliver the message explicitly. Secondly, communication is two ways of understanding. For instance, Indonesian meet Indian person, and they speak with different language, so they cannot understand. In addition, people must share language that they already know by each other to communicate.
In summary, some conditions make people communicate better if they share same language and sometimes body language, and mimics face are helpful for deliver the message.
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Sentence: In summary, some conditions make people communicate better if they share same language and sometimes body language, and mimics face are helpful for deliver the message.
Description: The token for is not usually followed by a verb, base: uninflected present, imperative or infinitive
Suggestion: Refer to for and deliver
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