Life is unpredictable, a person could encounter versatile changes throughout his life. Some changes could be for the best, others unfortunately could be bad. I personally, when comparing my life to five years ago, have definitely changed in several ways.
To begin with, five years ago, I was living in Jerusalem among my family and my beloved ones, therefore I felt so much secure. For example; I didn't have to worry, if encountered by any kind of problem because I was confident that I would be embraced with all the support of my family and friends. Moreover, at that time I used to work, hence...
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