Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?
Life today is easier and more comfortable than it was when your grandparents were children.
Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.
As the benefit of science and technology advance, we have many new innovations simply for easier and more convenient life. Cars, air-conditioner, and computers surely make our lives a lot different from the lives of our grandparents when they were young, and bring us much more advantage. We can travel longer by cars, sleep sweeter in the summer day with the help of air-conditioner, and do our jobs easier on computers. However, are all the product aimed for our comfort and convenience really give what we want? Think about polluted environment, increasingly competitive society, and all the press...
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Sentence:The life of my dad of dad is much more easier than me when he was a child.
Sentence:The life of my dad of dad is much easier than me when he was a child.
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Sentence: Also, it make us sick, and we have to fight with much more diseases than our forefathers.
Description: The fragment it make us is rare
Sentence: Possible agreement error: Replace make with verb, past tense
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