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Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? Parents are the best teachers. Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer
Teachers have a great influence on their students, this is an undeniable truth. But when the individuals for meet their teachers, Most of their character are already moulded by their life givers. In my point of view, Parents have far more influence on their children. The reasons why I think that way goes as follows.
First of all, Parents give us life, they know our merits and demerits.They know us like a book, how we act, react to situations, what do we like, dislike. Since they know you well, it’s much more easier to teach something. Because they can choose an alternate ways of teaching ...
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Sentence: But when the individuals for meet their teachers, Most of their character are already moulded by their life givers.
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Sentence: Another reason for my attitude is that the reasearcher's approve that many of the basic manners which adapts us to society, is learned in the early infanthood.
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Sentence: Parents prepare us to society by teaching the basic manners which is mostly will be our permanent characteristics.
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Sentence: But when the individuals for meet their teachers, Most of their character are already moulded by their life givers.
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