Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?
Students are more influenced by their teachers than by their friends.
Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.
Students, studying in that classes and under the instruction of their teachers, could be affected well by their instructors, as many parents desire. On the other hand, the ones sitting just beside students are their classmates, many of them are friends, which means they could also make some influence. Some claim that students, if they try hard to follow the rules and disciplines in the school, they would not be affected by the bad students to do something wrong. That is, they might be able to be influenced by their teachers more than by their friends. However, in my opinion, I disagree with th...
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Sentence: Think about with whom they they eat lunch, with whom they go out to play, and even with whom they write homeworks, study ,and prepare for exams.
Description: A pronoun, personal, nominative, not 3rd person singular is not usually followed by a pronoun, personal, nominative, not 3rd person singular
Suggestion: Refer to they and they
Sentence: They count on the advices of their friends, and, gradually, their ideas and attitude toward problems could be affect largely also.
Description: The word affect is not usually used as a noun, singular, common
Suggestion: Refer to affect , did you mean effect
Sentence: As a result, they are vulnerable to their friends' judgement and would probably do whatever their friends want they to do, regardless of everything they have learned in classes, which is very risky.
Description: The tag a pronoun, personal, nominative, not 3rd person singular is not usually followed by to
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