Television programs, movies, and video games can absolutely have a great impact on people's behavior. Sometimes, the impact is beneficial, in other occasions , it is entirely detrimental.
Television programs, movies, and video games can have a great influence on people's behavior in so many aspects. Firstly, they definitely can provide a good general knowledge. For example " who wants to be a millionaire" is a very famous TV show that infringe an interesting general knowledge. Secondly they can also reflect particular social problem, and suggest a solution through a particular movie or a T...
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Sentence: Finally, they can provide a good learning methods;There are so many educational Tv rograms, movies and video games; they can reinforce Languages, Math as well as social sciences.
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Sentence: On the other hand, such programs, movies and video games can also be extemely dangerous.
Error: extemely Suggestion: extremely
Sentence: For example 'the batchelor', a TV show' to which so many teenagers are attracted, is an absolute waste of time, from which they can only learn bad words and expressions, that they are not in need to. some movies could have psychological effects on people.
Error: batchelor Suggestion: bachelor
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