2. Tell a story about yourself. What animal, plant, or other nonhuman thing would yoube? Describe your abilities and traits. You may choose to speak about a person youknow well, instead of your self.

It is off the topic. It is not 'what i want to be', but 'who am I if i am like an animal or plant'.

for example, we may say: I think I like a dog. first, i am a good follower. I am not a leader. ....second, i am very loyal...

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other of the flaws:
1. always remember give at least two reasons to support the ideas or opinions

2. Don't repeat words, phrases and sentences. like: 'push ups'