TPO 34 - Question 2 Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? Private car should not be allowed in the city centers of large cities. Use details and examples to explain your opinion.

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for the pattern:

reason + why reason + advantages of the reason

'advantages of the reason' is duplicated to the reason itself in the second reason. You have this issue in other speakings too.

You may change the pattern to:
reason + why reason 1 + why reason 2

remove 'advantages of the reason '