University
In the world there are many university and many people want continue study in university. Each city has university different. In university there many who people get there for example increased knowledge, new experience and carrier.
First of all, I would to explain about increased. Many people came to university for continue study after they graduate senior high school. In university there are many mayor and we can choose one of mayor which we want to take for continue study. For example, I can to take medical, in there I can learned about medical and want get many education about many medical. Mayor very important for me to became success. Many people success because they diligent to study in university.
Secondly, many people continue study in university because they want to get new experience in there. There are many new experience we can get university we can get many friends who give me many new experience. They can teach about new experience, with they I also can get many information because they usually give new information in the world like entertainment and problem in Indonesia. Many friends, so also many information which we have from they.
Finally, many people continue study in university for preparing preparation carrier. In there they can get mayor scholar which they take. for example they take mayor medical. After graduate in university they can get many job the hospital. In hospital they can become a doctor which success.
To sum up, In university have many benefits so many people continue study in university and they can get many benefits. And many people have reasons different for continue study in university.
Sentence: Each city has university different.
Description: A noun, singular, common is not usually followed by an adjective
Suggestion: Refer to university and different
Sentence: In university there many who people get there for example increased knowledge, new experience and carrier.
Description: An existential there is not usually followed by a determiner/pronoun, post-determiner
Suggestion: Refer to there and many
Sentence: Many people came to university for continue study after they graduate senior high school.
Description: The token for is not usually followed by a verb, base: uninflected present, imperative or infinitive
Suggestion: Refer to for and continue
Sentence: In university there are many mayor and we can choose one of mayor which we want to take for continue study.
Description: The token for is not usually followed by a verb, base: uninflected present, imperative or infinitive
Suggestion: Refer to for and continue
Sentence: For example, I can to take medical, in there I can learned about medical and want get many education about many medical.
Description: A modal auxillary is not usually followed by a verb, past participle
Suggestion: Refer to can and learned
Sentence: Mayor very important for me to became success.
Description: The token to is not usually followed by a verb, past tense
Suggestion: Refer to to and became
Sentence: Many people success because they diligent to study in university.
Description: A noun, plural, common is not usually followed by a noun, singular, common
Suggestion: Refer to people and success
Description: A pronoun, personal, nominative, not 3rd person singular is not usually followed by an adjective
Suggestion: Refer to they and diligent
Sentence: They can teach about new experience, with they I also can get many information because they usually give new information in the world like entertainment and problem in Indonesia.
Description: A preposition is not usually followed by a pronoun, personal, nominative, not 3rd person singular
Suggestion: Refer to with and they
Sentence: Many friends, so also many information which we have from they.
Description: A preposition is not usually followed by a pronoun, personal, nominative, not 3rd person singular
Suggestion: Refer to from and they
Sentence: In there they can get mayor scholar which they take. for example they take mayor medical.
Description: A noun, singular, common is not usually followed by an adjective
Suggestion: Refer to mayor and medical
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No. of Grammatical Errors: 12 2
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No. of Grammatical Errors: 12 2
No. of Spelling Errors: 0 2
No. of Sentences: 19 15
No. of Words: 275 350
No. of Characters: 1349 1500
No. of Different Words: 94 200
Fourth Root of Number of Words: 4.072 4.7
Average Word Length: 4.905 4.6
Word Length SD: 2.527 2.4
No. of Words greater than 5 chars: 86 100
No. of Words greater than 6 chars: 72 80
No. of Words greater than 7 chars: 48 40
No. of Words greater than 8 chars: 33 20
Use of Passive Voice (%): 0 0
Avg. Sentence Length: 14.474 21.0
Sentence Length SD: 5.852 7.5
Use of Discourse Markers (%): 0.474 0.12
Sentence-Text Coherence: 0.466 0.35
Sentence-Para Coherence: 0.614 0.50
Sentence-Sentence Coherence: 0.234 0.07
Number of Paragraphs: 5 5