The graph and table below give information about water use worlwide and water consumption in two different countries.
Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The below chart and table depict the amount of global water conssumption in one century and seperately in Brazil and Cogo in 2000.
Looking at the information very specifically in the first graph , it is shown that all trends are upwards. Using water in agricultural purposes was around 5000 km3 in 1900. After a dramatic rise during the next four decades,it touched a double amount. From this point onward, another rapid climb is observed. Actually water agricultural used , peaked almost 3000 km3 in 2000.
In addition, there were a constant levelling off in the first ten years in both industrial and domestic usage(0%) .
Then the trends incresed suddenly to peak by approximately 9000 km3 and 2000 km3 respectively in the last year.
However, the table illustrates that Brazil with 176 million citizens, utilized almost 26500 km2 ,while 5.2 Congo inhabitants usage was around 100km2 for agricultural reasons in 2000.
To sum up, according to statistics calculation , above countries ' water consumption amount were higher than total widspread water usage .
The below chart and table depict the amount of global water conssumption in one century and seperately in Brazil and Cogo in 2000.
The line graph and the table illustrate the usage of water in the world from 1990 to 2000 and water consumption in Brazil and Congo in 2000.
Sentence: Actually water agricultural used , peaked almost 3000 km3 in 2000.
Description: A noun, singular, common is not usually followed by an adjective
Suggestion: Refer to water and agricultural
Sentence: The below chart and table depict the amount of global water conssumption in one century and seperately in Brazil and Cogo in 2000.
Error: seperately Suggestion: separately
Error: conssumption Suggestion: consumption
Sentence: Then the trends incresed suddenly to peak by approximately 9000 km3 and 2000 km3 respectively in the last year.
Error: incresed Suggestion: increased
Sentence: To sum up, according to statistics calculation , above countries ' water consumption amount were higher than total widspread water usage .
Error: widspread Suggestion: widespread
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