The line graph below shows the changes in the share price of Outokumpu companies in euros between January 2006 and December 2010.
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This line graph represents the changes in the share price of Outokumpu companies in euros in a five-year period from January 2006 and December 2010.
The share price of Outokumpu companies started at Euro 13. Share price had a sudden increase from Euro 0 to Euro 30 between 2006 and 2007. After 2007 there were some fluctuations but the sales price remained Euro 30 at the end of 2008. Sales dropped rapidly to Euro7 in the mid of 2008. Sales price slightly rose from Euro 5 to Euro 15 at the start of 2009. The sales price had slight fluctuations between 2009 and 2010. Until late 2010 the trend was downward again, ending the year at just over EUR 12.
Outokumpu made significant gains and losses in sales between 2006 and 2010 but at the end it had only Euro 1 loss per share.
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