Some people prefer to live in a small town. Others prefer to live in a big city. Which place would you prefer to live in? Use specific reasons and details to support your answer.
When it comes to the issue the selection between a small city and big city, some people believe that they will have more facilities in a big city, and their lives will be better. However, others maintain the opposite view, and they think that you will have fewer problems in a small city. As far as I am concerned, the former point carries more weight. I take this position on account for the following reasons.
The first and most important reason is that living in a big city is affordable. As we all know, in the big city, you access more shopping centers, restaurants, and malls. In this way, there is a serious competition and most businesses try to attract more customers even by decreasing prices. I think that a small example can give some light on this topic. Imagine a person who woks as a teacher and do not have enough money to purchase a private car. In the big city, he will be able to use public transportations, which afford means of transport. All in all, by an accurate plan, you could save more money, which was not possible in the small city.
There is also a more subtle point we must consider. In a big city, you will possess more facilities. In the small city, you do not have more options as recreation. However, you will be faced different conditions in the big city, because of many restaurants, movie theaters, and even a football stadium. In addition, you can see a lot of people from different culture, religions, races, and that is very exciting that you do not see the same people every day. For instance, sometimes meeting their friends in your home may be boring. In the big city, you can invite your friend to go to a new restaurant and while you are eating or drinking, you could talk about the daily subject. Generally, you can make more joy time in the big city.
Apart from the points I made above, more job opportunities are the main reason for living in a big city. The unemployment is a serious crisis not only in the poor country but also in the developed Western country. The big city has many companies, factories, and even small businesses, and you have more chances to find a suitable vocation there.
Taking into account all of these factors, we may reach the conclusion that living in a big city obviously is convenient, attractive, and you can find more jobs. Of course, as an English proverb goes “coin has two sides,” it is quite normal that the big city has more problems such as terrific jam, pollutions, and so on. Nonetheless, I think that its benefits outweigh dangers. Last but not least, let us hope that the small cities will be developed, and more people work in their town.
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Discourse Markers used:
['also', 'but', 'first', 'however', 'if', 'may', 'nonetheless', 'so', 'while', 'apart from', 'for instance', 'i think', 'in addition', 'of course', 'such as']
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance in Part of Speech:
Nouns: 0.210144927536 0.229887763892 91% => OK
Verbs: 0.126811594203 0.158761421928 80% => OK
Adjectives: 0.130434782609 0.0866891130778 150% => OK
Adverbs: 0.0471014492754 0.046263068375 102% => OK
Pronouns: 0.0615942028986 0.0685040099705 90% => OK
Prepositions: 0.101449275362 0.118717715034 85% => OK
Participles: 0.0144927536232 0.0351676179071 41% => Some participles wanted.
Conjunctions: 2.54873173807 2.67179642975 95% => OK
Infinitives: 0.0126811594203 0.0309702414327 41% => Some infinitives wanted.
Particles: 0.0 0.00188951952338 0% => OK
Determiners: 0.101449275362 0.0887237588012 114% => OK
Modal_auxiliary: 0.0307971014493 0.0209618222197 147% => OK
WH_determiners: 0.00724637681159 0.0139019557991 52% => OK
Vocabulary words and sentences:
No of characters: 2675.0 2387.08602151 112% => OK
No of words: 477.0 408.028673835 117% => OK
Chars per words: 5.60796645702 5.86048508987 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.67336384929 4.48200974243 104% => OK
words length more than 5 chars: 0.268343815514 0.338922669872 79% => OK
words length more than 6 chars: 0.201257861635 0.251872472559 80% => OK
words length more than 7 chars: 0.14465408805 0.174417080927 83% => OK
words length more than 8 chars: 0.0901467505241 0.112833075102 80% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.54873173807 2.67179642975 95% => OK
Unique words: 237.0 212.727598566 111% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.496855345912 0.524397521467 95% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
Word variations: 57.4111624783 59.2087087015 97% => OK
How many sentences: 26.0 20.6684587814 126% => OK
Sentence length: 18.3461538462 20.5533526081 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 38.9683531135 48.84282405 80% => OK
Chars per sentence: 102.884615385 120.699889404 85% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.3461538462 20.5533526081 89% => OK
Discourse Markers: 0.576923076923 0.644075263715 90% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.5376344086 110% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 5.54480286738 108% => OK
Readability: 38.4719400097 45.7405998639 84% => OK
Elegance: 1.38461538462 1.45489161554 95% => OK
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.271455470743 0.300154397459 90% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence: 0.0782095977888 0.103427244359 76% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence SD: 0.0678579112382 0.0752933317313 90% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence: 0.475299848815 0.497263757937 96% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence SD: 0.152989351023 0.151897553556 101% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.106513341357 0.114077575197 93% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0647196215201 0.0781384742642 83% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence: 0.432662848548 0.336927656856 128% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence SD: 0.0659090580509 0.067059652881 98% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.19705310983 0.210909579961 93% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.061268367802 0.0618886996521 99% => OK
Task Achievement:
Sentences with positive sentiment : 13.0 11.8870967742 109% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.86379928315 78% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 10.0 4.91756272401 203% => Less neutral sentences wanted.
Positive topic words: 10.0 8.42114695341 119% => OK
Negative topic words: 0.0 2.4623655914 0% => More negative topic words wanted.
Neutral topic words: 4.0 2.75985663082 145% => OK
Total topic words: 14.0 13.6433691756 103% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
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Rates: 70.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.0 Out of 30
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