do you agree or disagree?The way a person dressed in is a good indication of his/her character or personality
Writing number 24(indep-toefl exam)
Time:35
The question is whether dress can indicate people's personality or not. Everyone in consideration to his private view point can maintain a specific direction toward this statement; however I am inclined to express that dress plays an important role in creating our character. I feel this way for some reasons, which I will explore them in following essay for empowering my view:
To begin with, nobody could overlook this fact that such a technology-driven world requires to connect with different people and diverse backgrounds compared with the past, so it goes without saying people need to be up-dated not only in mind, but also in clothing field. Furthermore, the fashion industry has been improved during these years and it strongly keeps marching forward. Despite of all economic crises, human beings would rather to spend money for dressing. The soul of humanistic looks always for beauties; hence the cloths are able to cover this vital need. Needless to say when a person wears chic or neat; on the one hand, he respects himself; on the other hand, he obtains a sense of confidence. One should not forget that having high self- esteem boosts people's performance whether in their work place, society, confronting with their friends and this list seems endless.
The second reason for my advocating lies in the fact that people judge us in several ways. One of the most crucial factors for their judgment is what kind we dress. One should accept that nowadays people's mind is in their eyes. If a person wears neat; spontaneously people prefer to relay on him. One has to notice that being neat is different with wearing expensive clothing. Elegant dresses and being decent cause people take you into account as an order person and for this reason; it is usually a striking feature in job interviewing.
Moreover, the psychologists believe that the type of clothing can help them to recognize the people's personality like being introvert or extrovert. To elucidate, take a person who wears almost jean or he has sport style, it is obvious such a person is willing to experience exciting things or better his character is active and witty. Or a person who dresses smart with tie, people think about him as political person.
As I have illustrated, this conclusion could be drawn that our clothing not only affect on our character, but also it can influence on people how to behave with us.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 9, column 94, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[1]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'peoples'' or 'people's'?
Suggestion: peoples'; people's
...clothing can help them to recognize the peoples personality like being introvert or ext...
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Line 11, column 82, Rule ID: AFFECT_EFFECT[1]
Message: Did you mean 'effect'?
Suggestion: effect
...uld be drawn that our clothing not only affect on our character, but also it can influenc...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, furthermore, hence, however, if, look, moreover, second, so, as to, i feel, to begin with, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 15.1003584229 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 9.8082437276 122% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 13.8261648746 101% => OK
Relative clauses : 12.0 11.0286738351 109% => OK
Pronoun: 48.0 43.0788530466 111% => OK
Preposition: 50.0 52.1666666667 96% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.0752688172 111% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2045.0 1977.66487455 103% => OK
No of words: 410.0 407.700716846 101% => OK
Chars per words: 4.98780487805 4.8611393121 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.49982852243 4.48103885553 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.64077868746 2.67179642975 99% => OK
Unique words: 251.0 212.727598566 118% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.612195121951 0.524837075471 117% => OK
syllable_count: 607.5 618.680645161 98% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 9.59856630824 63% => OK
Interrogative: 0.0 0.994623655914 0% => OK
Article: 5.0 3.08781362007 162% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.51792114695 57% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 1.86738351254 161% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.94265232975 101% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 20.6003584229 87% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 20.1344086022 109% => OK
Sentence length SD: 72.7631028462 48.9658058833 149% => OK
Chars per sentence: 113.611111111 100.406767564 113% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.7777777778 20.6045352989 111% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.61111111111 5.45110844103 121% => OK
Paragraphs: 6.0 4.53405017921 132% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 2.0 5.5376344086 36% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 14.0 11.8709677419 118% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.85842293907 26% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.88709677419 61% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.169480877705 0.236089414692 72% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0578809597326 0.076458572812 76% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.069801562946 0.0737576698707 95% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0864853755879 0.150856017488 57% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.091152504176 0.0645574589148 141% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.5 11.7677419355 115% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 57.61 58.1214874552 99% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 10.1575268817 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.96 10.9000537634 110% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.27 8.01818996416 103% => OK
difficult_words: 92.0 86.8835125448 106% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 18.0 10.002688172 180% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.0537634409 107% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.247311828 107% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 83.3333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 25.0 Out of 30
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