The chart below gives information on the global sale of the hybrid vehicles between 2006 and 2009.
Summarise the information by selecting and reportingthe main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The given graph illustrates the statistics of total sales in hybrid vehicle in some countries over a 4-year period, from 2006 to 2009.
Overall, US was a country that had the highest sales of hybrid mechine during the period, which it was in 2007.
From the graph, apparantly statistics for total sales of hybrid mechine in Japan and other countries were quite similar from 2006 to 2008. Both of Japan and other countries had a slight increase at that period. While other countries continued to rise slightly in 2009 to above 100,000, Japan rose extremely from 100,000 to just under 350,000 in 2009.
The number of hybrid vehicle sales in US led as the highest among Japan and other countries between 2006 and 2008. The numbers peaked at 350,000 in 2007, then the total sales fell down slightly to around 280,000 in 2009, which the numbers were lower than those in Japan.
Sentence: Overall, US was a country that had the highest sales of hybrid mechine during the period, which it was in 2007.
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Sentence: From the graph, apparantly statistics for total sales of hybrid mechine in Japan and other countries were quite similar from 2006 to 2008.
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