Family who do not send their children to get financed schools should not be required to pay taxes that support universal education. Do you agree or disagree.
In this rampant age of globalization, education is a basic requirement to live a good life as well as in today's era, man can stand no where without education. family who do not send their off springs to government school, they must pay taxes to support universal education because there are lots of benefits to pay taxes. here i would like to disagree given this statement.
To set in, there are ample points to endorse my view. First and foremost, we must pay a sizable contribution to endorse universal education because mostly destitute children get admission in government school who do not able to pay fees, buy books, dress and many more. So, government schools offer off springs to get free education, books, dresses and many more. Thus, we should pay taxes to support universal education so that children get a better education in schools which is fruitful to bright their future.
Further emphasizing on my point of view. Initially, off springs get a great deal of knowledge in that schools after that many companies provide job opportunities. As a result, young generation get a better job according to their choice. Therefore, it is helpful to vanish poverty and unemployment as well as it also helpful to flourish the economy, Thus, we ought to pay taxes to support universal education.
further, last but not least, some countries, government are not having surplus funds to run and built new government schools. Hence, we must pay taxes to endorse universal education through which that countries's off springs can get a high education and they can develop the economy of their nation. So, there are lots of benefits to pay taxes as well as ti is lucrative for every one. Thus, we should pay taxes to endorse universal education.
In a nutshell, in today's age, it is necessary for each and every person to relies the value of education. I would say man is social animal. we must pay taxes to support universal education because it is fruitful for every one.
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Sentence: In a nutshell, in today's age, it is necessary for each and every person to relies the value of education.
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