The graph below shows the consumption of fish and some different kinds of meat in a European country between 1979 and 2004.
Given is the diagram providing a comparison of consumption of fish and meat in a particular European country during 1979-2004.
A glance at the graph reveals that, although great fluctuations were observed the curve for beef consumption ranked first till 1989 and was marginally ahead of other lines. Nevertheless this curve showed an upward trend and had dramatically decreased from approximately 200 to 100 grams for the period of 1989-2004.
The similar pattern is also observed on lamb consumption, precisely, the amount of consumed lamb had gradually declined from about 150 to 60 grams duri...
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Sentence: In contrast, there was marked great increase on consumption of chichken between 1979 and 2004.
Error: chichken Suggestion: chicken
Sentence: Overall, the graph illustrates that from 1979 to 2004 there were great differecies in people?s meat and fish consumption.
Error: differecies Suggestion: differences
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