IELTS writing task 2

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IELTS writing task 2

Education is the principal thing in human life. How significant is the parents’ attitude to the education of their children? Is it more important than the quality of schools and teachers in creating well-educated people? In this essay, I will present my argument.

The statement is acceptable when the parents are smarter and have higher tutelage than their children’s teachers. However, I believe that the standpoint of parents to the edification of their children in the same way with the condition of schools and teachers which bring into being well-educated people. For instance, in my daug...

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Average: 8.3 (10 votes)
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Sentence: Eventually, our knowledge in edify our daughter is improving.
Description: The token in is not usually followed by a verb, base: uninflected present, imperative or infinitive
Suggestion: Refer to in and edify

Sentence: In conclusion, let me reiterate that the characteristic of schools and teachers in construct knowledgeable people is as significant as parent's viewpoint, and they have to be collaborated.
Description: The token in is not usually followed by a verb, base: uninflected present, imperative or infinitive
Suggestion: Refer to in and construct

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No. of Words: 250 350
No. of Characters: 1315 1500
No. of Different Words: 140 200

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Attribute Value Ideal
Score: 5.5 out of 9
Category: Satisfactory Excellent
No. of Grammatical Errors: 2 2
No. of Spelling Errors: 0 2
No. of Sentences: 14 15
No. of Words: 250 350
No. of Characters: 1315 1500
No. of Different Words: 140 200
Fourth Root of Number of Words: 3.976 4.7
Average Word Length: 5.26 4.6
Word Length SD: 2.983 2.4
No. of Words greater than 5 chars: 100 100
No. of Words greater than 6 chars: 88 80
No. of Words greater than 7 chars: 67 40
No. of Words greater than 8 chars: 42 20
Use of Passive Voice (%): 0 0
Avg. Sentence Length: 17.857 21.0
Sentence Length SD: 7.424 7.5
Use of Discourse Markers (%): 0.429 0.12
Sentence-Text Coherence: 0.348 0.35
Sentence-Para Coherence: 0.548 0.50
Sentence-Sentence Coherence: 0.098 0.07
Number of Paragraphs: 4 5