In many cities crime is increasing. Why do you think this is happening? What can government do to reduce such crime levels? Give reasons for your answers and include any relevant examples
It is certain that today, World is not free of crimes. Crimes are increasing at an alarming rate. The three main reasons for crime are overpopulation, increasing inflation and unemployment. Nonetheless, the government must impart definite rules and regulation so as to solve these causes of crime.
At first, the increasing population and unemployment are matter of concern. Today’s world report entails that population is booming as oppose to employment opportunities. In order to sustain basic needs of a family, people are following wrong route to earn money in less time such as robberies, th...
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Sentence: In addition, it is vital for citizens to help the victims of crime that is if they observe any eve-teasing on road, they must try to defend the victim in addition to calling police.
Error: eve-teasing Suggestion: ever teasing
Sentence: It is very difficult for poor people to fulfil their basic needs such food and shelter.
Error: fulfil Suggestion: fulfill
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You didn't develop the sentences smoothly.
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