In many countries children are engaged in some kind of paid work. Some people regard this as completely wrong, while others consider it as valuable work experience, important for learning and taking responsibility.What are your opinions on this?

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In many countries children are engaged in some kind of paid work. Some people regard this as completely wrong, while others consider it as valuable work experience, important for learning and taking responsibility.
What are your opinions on this?

Some people think that children should not be worked in different job areas. Others think that working is so beneficial to get responsibility for children. The issue is a controversial one, but in my opinion a closer examination reveals that working would bring harm to the child’s health and learning for several reasons. I will explain my position providing examples to support my point of view.

First of all, job areas are not meant for children, because there are a great deal of harmful things such as various powder clouds, chemical fumes and so on in there. Furthermore, sometime children may face different difficult condition that they may damage and lose their health. Undoubtedly, young people would suffer in such workplaces. Also, when children are involved to work, they will not spend enough time for studying. Obviously, the paragraph indicates negative sides of the working for children.

On the other hand, sometime children work to increase their home income in poor families. Furthermore, employers take children to work for giving little money. It’s clear that adults’ salary is much more than children. Although the employment of children is prohibited in some countries, children do exploitation with illegal ways. In my opinion, government should provide parents with jobs. By dint of this way, children can be interested in their education and live like child.

In summary, it is clear that some kind of paid work affect badly to mental, physical and spiritual development of children. In my perspective, children start working from adult age and they have better understanding about life.

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sometimes children work to increase their home income

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