The pie chart below shows the main reason why agricultural land becomes less productive The table shows how there causes affected three regions of the world during the 1990s Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make c

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The pie chart below shows the main reason why agricultural land becomes less productive. The table shows how there causes affected three regions of the world during the 1990s. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The pie chart describes the main reason of land degradation in the world during the 1990s. The table illustrates the proportion of less productive land in three regions.

The most striking feature from the pie chart is that the land degradation only caused by three component. There are over-grazing, over-cultivation and deforestation. Each of that causes take around one-third of all land. Furthermore, from the three main reasons, over-cultivation has the smallest percentage. It is around 28%, while, deforestation has bigger percentage than over-cultivation. The difference between them is 2%....

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Sentence: Each of that causes take around one-third of all land.
Description: A verb, present tense, 3rd person singular is not usually followed by a verb, base: uninflected present, imperative or infinitive
Suggestion: Refer to causes and take

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