some people think that animals should be keep in zoos while others think that forests are better place for animals. Discuss both sides with own opinion.

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some people think that animals should be keep in zoos while others think that forests are better place for animals. Discuss both sides with own opinion.

Animals are sublime creation of the nature and animals play a terrific role in human being lives and some people think that zoos are a paramount place for animals where they find supreme facilities to survive happily. By contrast, other people think that forests have phenomenal environment to live in freedom and naturally where they enjoy life with own ways. Here, I would like to throw light on both sides with my own opinion.

There are multifarious point to support view of these people they think zoos are supreme place for animals. First and foremost,the availability of the breeding process in zoos is lucrative for manifold species whom at low ebb. Therefore, in zoos the number of animal species increasing day by day. Consequenty, zoos are boom for animals species. Moreover, medical treatment time to time in zoos yielding fruitful result for animals. Veterinary facilities in zoos easily handle severe disease which animals suffering. Hence, zoos are better place there animals easily prevention to disease.

By contrast, other people think that forests are play a significant role in animals life. Firstly, animals have also emotions like us, so they have attachments with own families. In forests they live very comfortable with families and own freedom to move here and there in natural environment. Thus, forests help to animals live happily with families and freedom.Furthermore, residing in forests of animals blessed a good food chain which is productive to maintain the number of animals species. Therefore, they eat anything according to the own choice.

From my notion, it is universally truth that 'everything has own importance'. Zoos are good place for animals where a lot of worker work for animals and provide a lot of amenities such as food, spik and span accommodation and so on. By contrast, living in forests make happier to animals. According to me, , animals should be keep in zoos as they, because zoos are elegant place for animals.

To recapitulate, zoos should be provide a natural environment to animals such as spacious, evolve accommodation and many more. Zoos are optimum place for animals.

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zoos are supreme places

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animals should be kept in zoos

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which are at low ebb.

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disease in which animals are suffering.

zoos should be provide a natural environment
zoos should provide a natural environment

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