some people think that government should provide library in every town with the increase in internet some people think that new libraries could be a waste of money discuss you opinions

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some people think that government should provide library in every town. with the increase in internet, some people think that new libraries could be a waste of money. discuss you opinions.

In the modern world, presence of internet has made the life so easier that all the things are easily accessible through it. since libraries are the best way to gain knowledge, some people ask for the libraries in every town. Although, some people consider it as a waste of money because they prefer internet over library. I believe government should provide library facility because it is easily approachable by everyone and also it teaches some extra activities.

Library is known as a house of knowledge and this has been in existence for long in almost all the countries. some people still consider it the best way of gaining knowledge. libraries are easily approachable by everyone. Mostly libraries are free of cost to join, that is why majority of people prefer it. Also, not all the people know how to use internet so they give priority to library. For example, my grand father is really keen to read books and to gain any information he always go to library,because he find it better than internet.this is one of the reasons why i believe libraries should be opened in every town.

Another reason, why I feel it is a good idea because it also helps children to get involve in different extra curricular activities. Apart from school, children can learn a lot by participating in extra curricular activities held in libraries. For instance, the library near to my house named as Brimbank library organize different activities every week in which anyone can participate. these activities include coloring competition, essay writing competition, reading competition, etc. for kids. And I believe that these activities build self confidence, team work,general knowledge, etc.

In conclusion, libraries play an important role when it comes to knowledge and doing some extra activities. although internet is easier to use but still I prefer library rather than using internet. As a result, government should take initiative to open libraries in every town.

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Sentence: For example, my grand father is really keen to read books and to gain any information he always go to library,because he find it better than internet.this is one of the reasons why i believe libraries should be opened in every town.
Description: The fragment he find it is rare
Suggestion: Possible agreement error: Replace find with verb, past tense

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