Some people think that large, impressive buildings are important for a city. Others believe that the money should be spent on improving schools and hospitals.Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

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Some people think that large, impressive buildings are important for a city. Others believe that the money should be spent on improving schools and hospitals.
Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

The feature of a city has a beautiful building. Building looks like a flower to become an interesting thing for other people. For example department store building, historical building and sport building. On the other hand, some people say if the city has those building, it is bad for other purposes, such as creating brilliant and health society. So, from this essay, it would explain the advantages and disadvantage on them.

Many impressive buildings in urban area describe that the city is development and rich. The government is able to persuade the society to memorize the history of city. So, the city becomes famous and becomes a tourism place. Of course, the earning of the city will increase. Besides, establishing many structures in the city also mean spending money excessively. It is because not all structure is visited every time by them, so the value of building will decrease.

On the contrary, if the government just notices to build a great building, the other essential building will be neglected. It is because many citizens need the health and the education. When they are sick, they must be hold by good facilities, such as comfortable rooms, surgery rooms, drugstores and so on. In the school/university, they need safety rooms, library, laboratory of computer and language, and field for exercise.

It can be concluded, even though building in the city is a sign of improvement, but the ministry also should pay attention to the other thing. He persuades the wealthy citizens to invest the money for business and social way prevalently and make the unique construction. In order to the city in the future is still hold on and be remembered by the inhabitants as progressive city.

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