some people want to host international sporting events in their own country. while others think that type of events bring more problems than benefits. Discuss both sides and give your opinion.

Essay topics:

some people want to host international sporting events in their own country. while others think that type of events bring more problems than benefits. Discuss both sides and give your opinion.

Sport plays a phenomenal role in our life in this jet age of 21st century. We have several international sports event such as Olympic games, common wealth game, world cup and so on. Some proportion of people think that hosting of these types events are lucrative for country. By contrast others people have different view. Here, I would like to throw light on both sides of hosting international games events.

Ther are multifarious point to support view of hosting international games events are beneficial for country. First and foremost, hosting sport event invite to thousand tourist to see live games. As a result, people of different culture get chance to share ideas, thoughts with each other which leads to harmonious relationships among countries. Furthermore, infrastructure of hosting city by country government has spend a lot of money on building such as hotels,eateries,ground,promises and so on. Consequently, hosting of international games lucrative for hosting city and country people.

By contrast, other people think that hosting of international games events are create manifold problems for country. Firstly, using of several modes of transportation for to and fro are enhance the number of gridlocks which are burn more fuel. Thus,burning of fuel by vehicles create harmful fumes which are address to many disease. Moreover, hosting of international games events are invite to crime is more because some people do betting with money through various illegal methods. Therefore,they considered these events have unacceptable impacts on country.

By notion, I would like to say that hosting of game events aware to country people. Next, these events are fruitful for new age player. Thus, organizing of international games events play a terrific role in country and people life.

To recapitulate, these international games events are lucrative for countries amd also for people. These events advantage outweigh on disadvantage. So government should be organised these events.

Votes
Average: 8 (3 votes)
Essay Categories

Comments

Sentence: By contrast others people have different view.
Description: A noun, plural, common is not usually followed by a noun, plural, common
Suggestion: Refer to others and people

Sentence: First and foremost, hosting sport event invite to thousand tourist to see live games.
Description: The fragment event invite to is rare
Suggestion: Possible agreement error: Replace invite with verb, past participle

Sentence: Furthermore, infrastructure of hosting city by country government has spend a lot of money on building such as hotels,eateries,ground,promises and so on.
Description: A verb 'to have', present tense, 3rd person singular is not usually followed by a verb, base: uninflected present, imperative or infinitive
Suggestion: Refer to has and spend

Sentence: So government should be organised these events.
Error: organised Suggestion: organized

flaws:
Avg. Sentence Length: 14.952 21.0
Sentence Length SD: 5.223 7.5

Attribute Value Ideal
Score: 6.5 out of 9
Category: Good Excellent
No. of Grammatical Errors: 3 2
No. of Spelling Errors: 1 2
No. of Sentences: 21 15
No. of Words: 314 350
No. of Characters: 1641 1500
No. of Different Words: 165 200
Fourth Root of Number of Words: 4.21 4.7
Average Word Length: 5.226 4.6
Word Length SD: 2.805 2.4
No. of Words greater than 5 chars: 126 100
No. of Words greater than 6 chars: 89 80
No. of Words greater than 7 chars: 51 40
No. of Words greater than 8 chars: 36 20
Use of Passive Voice (%): 0 0
Avg. Sentence Length: 14.952 21.0
Sentence Length SD: 5.223 7.5
Use of Discourse Markers (%): 0.571 0.12
Sentence-Text Coherence: 0.357 0.35
Sentence-Para Coherence: 0.535 0.50
Sentence-Sentence Coherence: 0.112 0.07
Number of Paragraphs: 5 5