Successful sport professionals can earn a great deal of money than people in other important professions. Some people think it is fully justified while others think it is unfair. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

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The world of sport is a multimillion-dollar industry. Recently successful sport professionals can earn enormous amount of money than other peoples who contributes their efforts in various other important fields, like teachers, scientists, doctors and so on. Some argue that these huge salaries are highly justified, while others deem it as unfair.

On the one hand, various professions contribute to making our world run more smoothly. Teachers educate and inspire young people and their efforts produce responsible citizens of tomorrow. Social workers, nurses, and rescue individuals are facing physical and psychological challenges while fulfilling their duties. Their intervention creates better ...

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