It is very debatable issue that whether developing technology lead to omitting the traditional skills and ways of life or not. There are many arguments supporting both views, those for and those against. Although technology changes the ways of life, it contributes to keep traditional skills alive.
It is obvious that thanks to expanding technology, people would be able to live more comfortable rather than the past. Technology helps them to communicate with each other whenever they want from any where. More over, they can reap the benefits of many new inventions that are invented through dev...
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Hai Sir.. I like the way
Hai Sir..
I like the way you corrected the 1st flow sentence. Now i feel the real presence of a teacher. You are more appreciated if you correct me in this way instead of telling change wth past tense, adjective and so on....
Hope you will consider it in future too
Thanks a lot...
Tessy James..
Sentence: In conclusion, I think that technology brings us a lot of advantages and
It is very debatable issue that whether developing technology lead to omitting the traditional skills and ways of life or not.
Suggestion: It is a very debatable issue that whether or not developing technology leads to omitting the traditional skills and ways of life .
Sentence: changes ways of life in a better way which leads to increasing wale fare.More over, it try to keep traditional skills alive and transform them to next generation.
Description: A noun, plural, common is not usually followed by a noun, plural, common
Suggestion: Refer to changes and ways
Getting better.
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Category: Good Excellent
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No. of Spelling Errors:0 2
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Fourth Root of Number of Words: 4.21 4.7
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