Write a report for a university lecturer describing the information in the two graphs below.
- You should write at least 150 words.
- Allow yourself 20 minutes for this task.
This pie chart below shows information about the percentage of women level education in someland between 1945 and 1995.
No schooling and third grade are the largest percentage of women level education with thirty-five percent in 1945. Women study in year 6 have portion with fifteen percent. However, during the same period there is no women study in first degree and women who study post graduate just four percent.
In other hand, first graduate is the largest portion with a half percent in 1995. This is following women who study until year 12 and post graduate are the second large portion with twenty percent. Women have education in year 9 just ten percent. In comparison, there are no women who have education in year 6, third grade and no schooling.
To sum up, in 1945 women have less education and this situation is change in 1995 women have the highest level education because lots of women study in first degree and post graduate.
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