The following diagram shows how greenhouse gases trap energy from the Sun. Write a report for a university lecturer describing the information shown in the diagram.
The diagram illustrates the way greenhouse gases produced and affects to the surface of the earth.
The heat from the sun should directly absorb in the surface of the earth and it would bounce back to the space. However, this procedure is no longer possible due to the mankind actions such as the deforestation and polluted air.
There are various ways of releasing toxic fumes into the earth’s atmosphere, which are by means of public transport and factories. The engine of a car, plane, motorised boat or other form of vehicles release of toxic smokes and the pollutions from factories would...
- The pie chart shows the amount of money spent and received for a year in a children's charity located in the USA. 70
- The graph below shows the consumption of fish and some different kinds of meat in a European country between 1979 and 2004 50
- The table below gives information on consumer spending on different items in five different countries in 2002. 80
- The table below describes percentages of home schooled students in Some Country in 1999-2004. 100
- The graph below gives information on the population of turtles in India from 1980 to 2012 Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant 87
The diagram illustrates the way greenhouse gases produced and affects to the surface of the earth.
The diagram illustrates the way greenhouse gases are produced and the effects to the surface of the earth.
The heat from the sun should directly absorb in the surface
The heat from the sun should be directly absorbed in the surface
by cutting down the trees in the forests, which supposed to absorb all the carbon dioxide
by cutting down the trees in the forests, which are supposed to absorb all the carbon dioxide
All those combination of actions would create clouds which will trap the greenhouse gases to remain in the air and it will heat it up the earth’s temperature
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