Making of Pencil

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Making of Pencil

The picture illustrates how pencils are made in the production. Overall, it can be seen that the process is divided into two parallel stages. While pencil leads and pencil cases are made separately, they are assembled together to finish product.

First of all, pencil leads which contain ground graphite, clay and water are made into dough. Afterwards, these are placed into a forming press to produce a graphite rod. Next, the pieces of lead are dried and heated with 8000C in an oven. They are then sent to the production process of the case.

On the other hand, pencil cases from wood are cut....

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Sentence Length SD: 2.516 7.5
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