The Line graph illustrates the people who are unemployed in US and Japan over 6 years from 1993 to 1999.From the graph, we can observe that the unemployment rate in US was declined whereas in Japan unemployment rate is rose.
In the March 1993, the unemployment rate in US was over 7% and over time this rate kept on decreasing.On the contrary, the Japan unemployment rate was about 2.5% but kept on increasing over years.
Finally in 1999,the unemployment rate in the US was decreased to just over 4.5% which shows the improvement of unemployment rate in US.The Japan unemployment rate was increased to 4.5% over 6 years of period. Japanese job market show the opposite trend to the US job market.
Ultimately, US managed to overcome the problematic situation of unemployment in 1999. Apart from this unemployment in Japan kept on soaring year by year and reached at 4.5 percent in 1999. Finally unemployment issue of Japan became severe compared to the USA.
in Japan unemployment rate is rose.
in Japan unemployment rate is rising.
Japanese job market show the opposite trend
Japanese job market shows the opposite trend
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