Given chart illustrates the amount of money spent by France and United Kingdom on five particular consumables in 2010; the amounts are mentioned in pound sterlings.
At first a glance it is clear that cars were the costly among all commodities for both countries while for perfumes were the least spent item. Firstly, for cars France spent 400000 pounds whereas the UK exeeded the amount by 50000 pounds. Coming next, on computers France stood dominated compared to UK with almost 380000 and 350000 pounds respectively.
There were a huge difference in spending money for books in both countries, France alloted 300000 pounds in contrast UK spent 420000 pounds. France overwhelmed UK in perfumes by a small margin in perfumes while on cameras UK spent almost double amount than France.
Overall, UK stood first in cars books and cameras while France exeeded UK in other two consumables.
Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, while
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 4.0 7.0 57% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 1.0 6.8 15% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 1.0 3.15609756098 32% => OK
Pronoun: 2.0 5.60731707317 36% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 33.7804878049 21% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 0.0 3.97073170732 0% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 258.0 965.302439024 27% => More number of characters wanted.
No of words: 52.0 196.424390244 26% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.96153846154 4.92477711251 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 2.68534961428 3.73543355544 72% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.56339733892 2.65546596893 97% => OK
Unique words: 45.0 106.607317073 42% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.865384615385 0.547539520022 158% => OK
syllable_count: 77.4 283.868780488 27% => syllable counts are too short.
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.45097560976 103% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 1.53170731707 0% => OK
Article: 1.0 4.33902439024 23% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.07073170732 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 3.36585365854 30% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 2.0 8.94146341463 22% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 26.0 22.4926829268 116% => OK
Sentence length SD: 11.0 43.030603864 26% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 129.0 112.824112599 114% => OK
Words per sentence: 26.0 22.9334400587 113% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.0 5.23603664747 115% => OK
Paragraphs: 2.0 3.83414634146 52% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 0.0 1.69756097561 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 3.70975609756 54% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 4.09268292683 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.116476179798 0.215688989381 54% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0840655457265 0.103423049105 81% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0482642020792 0.0843802449381 57% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0840655457265 0.15604864568 54% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0482642020792 0.0819641961636 59% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.9 13.2329268293 113% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 53.55 61.2550243902 87% => OK
smog_index: 0.0 6.51609756098 0% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 10.3012195122 119% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.78 11.4140731707 103% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.87 8.06136585366 110% => OK
difficult_words: 13.0 40.7170731707 32% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 15.0 11.4329268293 131% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.4 10.9970731707 113% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 11.0658536585 136% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Minimum 150 words wanted.
Rates: 22.4719101124 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 2.0 Out of 9
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