Big salary is much more important than job satisfaction Do you agree or disagree Provide relevant examples if necessary

High salary is of prime importance in choosing a job, as it will hep to fulfill the needs and live a luxurious life, but job satisfaction will lead to productivity of work and maintain a healthy lifestyle. I disagree, that big salary is important than job satisfaction.

"Money is root cause of all evil". When high pay scale is offered by employer's, along with it more responsibilities and targets needs to be achieved. As a result, work pressure is developed because of which, the employee will have to work late during day hours, as well as, nights. Thereby, family relations are disrupted, as they will not be able to spend time together. On the other hand, health is affected, due to increased workload and stress, as they will lack physical exercise and relaxation. Bank balance will increase, but there will be no time to spend the money that is earned.

Job satisfaction plays a very important role in an individual life, when people are happy with their work, they work efficiently and without any force. The atmosphere at workplace becomes very pleasant, as well as, they achieve their goal with high success rate since they are in the area of their interest. The relationship with family and colleagues remains good, as a reason, life becomes more easier and happier.

Some people think, big salary is important to live in this competitive world, where things are very expensive. For example, sending children to a good school requires parents to pay high fees which can be possible only when income is high. Increase in bank balance will also improve the status in society as people will respect for the position owned by individuals. However, I think, self-satisfaction is very essential to live in this stressful world, when we are satisfied with the work we do, automatically success, position and money is achieved, as well as, healthy relations are developed at workplace and family.

In conclusion, money is not everything it only worsens our life, but when we are satisfied we make everyone around us happy.

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Average: 8.1 (66 votes)
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 393, Rule ID: MOST_COMPARATIVE[2]
Message: Use only 'easier' (without 'more') when you use the comparative.
Suggestion: easier
...remains good, as a reason, life becomes more easier and happier. Some people think, big...
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Discourse Markers used:
['also', 'but', 'however', 'if', 'so', 'well', 'for example', 'i think', 'in conclusion', 'as a result', 'as well as', 'on the other hand']

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance in Part of Speech:
Nouns: 0.241813602015 0.247107183377 98% => OK
Verbs: 0.163727959698 0.155533422707 105% => OK
Adjectives: 0.088161209068 0.0946595960268 93% => OK
Adverbs: 0.0503778337531 0.0501214627716 101% => OK
Pronouns: 0.0478589420655 0.0437548338989 109% => OK
Prepositions: 0.103274559194 0.122226691241 84% => OK
Participles: 0.0327455919395 0.0403226058552 81% => OK
Conjunctions: 2.82903410077 2.80594681477 101% => OK
Infinitives: 0.0277078085642 0.0326793684256 85% => OK
Particles: 0.0 0.00163938923432 0% => OK
Determiners: 0.0629722921914 0.0861772015684 73% => OK
Modal_auxiliary: 0.0251889168766 0.021408717616 118% => OK
WH_determiners: 0.0226700251889 0.011925033212 190% => OK

Vocabulary words and sentences:
No of characters: 2045.0 1933.35771543 106% => OK
No of words: 343.0 316.048096192 109% => OK
Chars per words: 5.96209912536 6.12580529183 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.30351707066 4.20517956788 102% => OK
words length more than 5 chars: 0.338192419825 0.374742101984 90% => OK
words length more than 6 chars: 0.268221574344 0.28420135186 94% => OK
words length more than 7 chars: 0.192419825073 0.203846283523 94% => OK
words length more than 8 chars: 0.137026239067 0.137316102897 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.82903410077 2.80594681477 101% => OK
Unique words: 186.0 176.037074148 106% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.542274052478 0.56093040696 97% => OK
Word variations: 58.5566496121 60.7387585426 96% => OK
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0891783567 99% => OK
Sentence length: 21.4375 20.7743622355 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 48.7999343621 49.517814964 99% => OK
Chars per sentence: 127.8125 127.492653851 100% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.4375 20.7743622355 103% => OK
Discourse Markers: 0.75 0.814263465372 92% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38877755511 114% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 3.99599198397 25% => OK
Readability: 48.2596574344 49.1944974215 98% => OK
Elegance: 1.44230769231 1.69124875643 85% => OK

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.124046822778 0.332605444948 37% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence: 0.0950799942404 0.102741220458 93% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence SD: 0.0815633477905 0.0668466124924 122% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence: 0.550954242574 0.534860350844 103% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence SD: 0.181705878428 0.148594505496 122% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0668125366519 0.134430193775 50% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.108185818066 0.0742795772207 146% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence: 0.253005670365 0.324371583561 78% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence SD: 0.0519635787878 0.0638462369009 81% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0892192256411 0.228012699653 39% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0772513472043 0.058150111329 133% => OK

Task Achievement:
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.68436873747 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.41683366733 59% => OK
Positive topic words: 10.0 5.90881763527 169% => OK
Negative topic words: 2.0 2.5751503006 78% => OK
Neutral topic words: 1.0 1.9629258517 51% => OK
Total topic words: 13.0 10.4468937876 124% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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