It is true that people in industrialized nations can expect to live longer than ever before. Although there will undoubtedly be some negative consequences of this trend, societies can take steps to mitigate these potential problems.
As people live longer and the populations of developed countries grow older, several related problems can be anticipated. The main issue is that there will obviously be more people of retirement age who will be eligible to receive a pension. The proportion of younger, working adults will be smaller, and governments will therefore receive less money in taxes in relation to the size of the population. In other words, an ageing population will mean a greater tax burden for working adults. Further pressures will include a rise in the demand for healthcare, and the fact young adults will increasingly have to look after their elderly relatives.
There are several actions that governments could take to solve the problems described above. Firstly, a simple solution would be to increase the retirement age for working adults, perhaps from 65 to 70. Nowadays, people of this age tend to be healthy enough to continue a productive working life. A second measure would be for governments to encourage immigration in order to increase the number of working adults who pay taxes. Finally, money from national budgets will need to be taken from other areas and spent on vital healthcare, accommodation and transport facilities for the rising numbers of older citizens.
In conclusion, various measures can be taken to tackle the problems that are certain to arise as the populations of countries grow older.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 492, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Further,
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Discourse Markers used:
['finally', 'first', 'firstly', 'if', 'look', 'second', 'so', 'therefore', 'in conclusion', 'in other words', 'it is true']
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance in Part of Speech:
Nouns: 0.237931034483 0.247107183377 96% => OK
Verbs: 0.165517241379 0.155533422707 106% => OK
Adjectives: 0.120689655172 0.0946595960268 127% => OK
Adverbs: 0.0310344827586 0.0501214627716 62% => OK
Pronouns: 0.00689655172414 0.0437548338989 16% => Some pronouns wanted.
Prepositions: 0.113793103448 0.122226691241 93% => OK
Participles: 0.0379310344828 0.0403226058552 94% => OK
Conjunctions: 2.81730400404 2.80594681477 100% => OK
Infinitives: 0.051724137931 0.0326793684256 158% => OK
Particles: 0.0 0.00163938923432 0% => OK
Determiners: 0.0827586206897 0.0861772015684 96% => OK
Modal_auxiliary: 0.0551724137931 0.021408717616 258% => Less modal verbs wanted (like 'must , shall , will , should , would , can , could , may , and might').
WH_determiners: 0.0137931034483 0.011925033212 116% => OK
Vocabulary words and sentences:
No of characters: 1643.0 1933.35771543 85% => OK
No of words: 265.0 316.048096192 84% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 6.2 6.12580529183 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.03470204552 4.20517956788 96% => OK
words length more than 5 chars: 0.403773584906 0.374742101984 108% => OK
words length more than 6 chars: 0.309433962264 0.28420135186 109% => OK
words length more than 7 chars: 0.211320754717 0.203846283523 104% => OK
words length more than 8 chars: 0.139622641509 0.137316102897 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.81730400404 2.80594681477 100% => OK
Unique words: 150.0 176.037074148 85% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.566037735849 0.56093040696 101% => OK
Word variations: 57.4515908001 60.7387585426 95% => OK
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0891783567 81% => OK
Sentence length: 20.3846153846 20.7743622355 98% => OK
Sentence length SD: 29.5868993878 49.517814964 60% => OK
Chars per sentence: 126.384615385 127.492653851 99% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.3846153846 20.7743622355 98% => OK
Discourse Markers: 0.846153846154 0.814263465372 104% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38877755511 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 3.99599198397 25% => OK
Readability: 51.328011611 49.1944974215 104% => OK
Elegance: 1.91525423729 1.69124875643 113% => OK
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.433174483292 0.332605444948 130% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence: 0.118701046946 0.102741220458 116% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence SD: 0.0602147690837 0.0668466124924 90% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence: 0.587284452199 0.534860350844 110% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence SD: 0.163622759141 0.148594505496 110% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.181155560645 0.134430193775 135% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0585256636586 0.0742795772207 79% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence: 0.343852215914 0.324371583561 106% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence SD: 0.0939569439889 0.0638462369009 147% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.286575053997 0.228012699653 126% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0681428031031 0.058150111329 117% => OK
Task Achievement:
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.68436873747 58% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.41683366733 59% => OK
Positive topic words: 4.0 5.90881763527 68% => OK
Negative topic words: 5.0 2.5751503006 194% => OK
Neutral topic words: 2.0 1.9629258517 102% => OK
Total topic words: 11.0 10.4468937876 105% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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