Most people believe that with the advancement of internet technology there is no need to travel the world to study their customs and culture. However, I believe that there are so many other benefits that can’t be obtained from the internet.
On the one hand, the Internet is flooded with a wide range of information. People living in any corner of the world can easily learn the social, political, economical aspects of the other country before visiting those places. Furthermore, it is significant to grasp the current news from the media like youtube and other reliable websites before visiting that place personally. For example, Every year thousands of tourists come to visit different natural sites of Nepal because different travel and tour agencies have advertised its extreme beauty on their websites.
On the second hand, There are numerous benefits to traveling to various parts of the world moreover, to feel the real world you have to mix up with its custom and culture which makes an unforgettable memory. Besides the closed frame of the internet, there are so many things to explore and feel. For instance, It is an opportunity to escape from the hustle and bustle of life moreover, it also helps to expand the friend circle. Traveling abroad recharges the person and they become more reproductive when they are back.
In conclusion, although internet technology helps people to learn the custom and culture of the world, I believe that there are several other benefits associated with it.
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, furthermore, however, if, moreover, second, so, for example, for instance, in conclusion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 19.0 24.0651302605 79% => OK
Preposition: 39.0 41.998997996 93% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.3376753507 36% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1297.0 1615.20841683 80% => OK
No of words: 253.0 315.596192385 80% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.12648221344 5.12529762239 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.98822939669 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.60375625323 2.80592935109 93% => OK
Unique words: 147.0 176.041082164 84% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.581027667984 0.561755894193 103% => OK
syllable_count: 418.5 506.74238477 83% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 44.8206301706 49.4020404114 91% => OK
Chars per sentence: 108.083333333 106.682146367 101% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.0833333333 20.7667163134 102% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.58333333333 7.06120827912 122% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.170419145999 0.244688304435 70% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0622072252846 0.084324248473 74% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0601016417488 0.0667982634062 90% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.11015558949 0.151304729494 73% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0421029577501 0.056905535591 74% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.3 13.0946893788 102% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 41.7 50.2224549098 83% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 11.3001002004 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.47 12.4159519038 100% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.86 8.58950901804 103% => OK
difficult_words: 67.0 78.4519038076 85% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.