The natural resources such as oil, forests and fresh water are being consumed at an alarming rate. what problems does it cause? how can we save these problems ?
In technological era with increasing population in the world and rapid growth of industries, people use more natural resources such as oil, water and forest. But these resources are limited and demanding and consumption is very high. It will be prevented by some solutions. I shall discuss some problems and give solutions in coming paragraphs.
To begin with, oil is main energy sources and it is known as non-renewable . It will finish very soon because its demand very high. Oil is used in vehicle, industries, factories and also in home. At industrial level we can use more public transport so definitely we use more oil resource. People are more educated so they can do some research and find alternate sources of energy it will benefit in future.
Secondly, water is main element for all. There can be no life without water . water is most precious thing today. Fresh water level use of water continuously and recycle water whenever possible. Because all machines become hot so water will helpful for cooling down. Water is used in growing plants and tress.
Finally , because of deforestation, many plants and animals are decreasing day by day. Animals and plants, which provides us food, medicine and other valuable products but they are facing extinction. We have also loose bio-diversity. Moreover, many city expanding the areas so many forests area's tress cut, so soil exposed to heavy rain and also washed away. Trees absorb carbon dioxide and it is very dangerous because it causes global warming. Government will take some actions and take some strict rules for cutting tress. Also human can grow some tress in area for few months and years so that day is not far when we will have greenery in all over.
In conclusion, I would like to say oil, water, and forests are very much demand and necessary. If we have to survive on earth so we use them very carefully for our better future.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, finally, if, moreover, second, secondly, so, in conclusion, such as, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 13.1623246493 122% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 7.85571142285 153% => OK
Conjunction : 21.0 10.4138276553 202% => Less conjunction wanted
Relative clauses : 3.0 7.30460921844 41% => OK
Pronoun: 22.0 24.0651302605 91% => OK
Preposition: 28.0 41.998997996 67% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1583.0 1615.20841683 98% => OK
No of words: 324.0 315.596192385 103% => OK
Chars per words: 4.88580246914 5.12529762239 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.24264068712 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.55571514448 2.80592935109 91% => OK
Unique words: 188.0 176.041082164 107% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.58024691358 0.561755894193 103% => OK
syllable_count: 511.2 506.74238477 101% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Interrogative: 0.0 0.384769539078 0% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 24.0 16.0721442886 149% => OK
Sentence length: 13.0 20.2975951904 64% => OK
Sentence length SD: 32.1285395802 49.4020404114 65% => OK
Chars per sentence: 65.9583333333 106.682146367 62% => OK
Words per sentence: 13.5 20.7667163134 65% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.875 7.06120827912 55% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 7.0 5.01903807615 139% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 8.67935871743 138% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 8.0 3.9879759519 201% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.198806475344 0.244688304435 81% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0558869958071 0.084324248473 66% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0457280728746 0.0667982634062 68% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.118147243093 0.151304729494 78% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0555911107832 0.056905535591 98% => OK
automated_readability_index: 8.4 13.0946893788 64% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 58.28 50.2224549098 116% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.4 11.3001002004 74% => Flesch kincaid grade is low.
coleman_liau_index: 10.49 12.4159519038 84% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.23 8.58950901804 96% => OK
difficult_words: 81.0 78.4519038076 103% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 5.5 9.78957915832 56% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 7.2 10.1190380762 71% => Gunning_fog is low.
text_standard: 8.0 10.7795591182 74% => The average readability is low. Need to improve the language.
What are above readability scores?
Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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