We live in an industrialized world, where everything relies on natural resources consumption. Most of the upscale industries such as motor wheels, constructions & pharmaceutical industries are high energy consumers, which is another burden that maximizes natural resources overuse.
By the start of the 19th century & the industrial revolution, natural resources that could be used as fewl for energy production such as wood (forests), coal then lastly oil, were consumed inequitably and in an accelerated pattern. While industries that relied on these energy resources grew & amazed the world with its inventions, resultant waste products accumulated polluting air, water & soil. On the other hand, natural environmental 1st line defense mechanisms against pollution exerted by earth`s largest greenery cover: the forests, were jeopardized by the unjust uprooting, which furtherly aggravated the problem. Thus, Global warming, Ozone hole & autoimmune diseases are few of the many faces of this problem. Moreover, another Alarming natural resource overconsumption is the fresh water shortage & in another word drought that is striking several regions around the world such as mid & west of Africa, which can be partly attributed to the population burst & partly to the global warming phenomenon & weather changes related to it. As a result of fresh irrigation & drinkable water shortage, famine spread & reap thousands of souls among affected areas every year.
Alarming bells rang by environmentalists & scientists during the 20th century, urged governments & other international organizations to look for solutions for these evolving threats. Consumption rationalization & environment-friendly energy resources alternatives are two of suggested solutions. Moreover, Funding ecological research is another important route to find out how to reverse other profound accumulated damaging effects.
In conclusion, many contributing efforts are needed to overcome such huge problem that threats life existence on earth,& if not adequately managed next generations will indeed face the threat of extinction.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 72, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[2]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'resources'' or 'resource's'?
Suggestion: resources'; resource's
...rld, where everything relies on natural resources consumption. Most of the upscale indust...
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Line 2, column 414, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ng air, water & soil. On the other hand, natural environmental 1st line defense m...
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Line 4, column 209, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...l indeed face the threat of extinction.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, if, lastly, look, moreover, so, then, thus, while, in conclusion, such as, as a result, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 7.85571142285 38% => OK
Conjunction : 1.0 10.4138276553 10% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 11.0 24.0651302605 46% => OK
Preposition: 34.0 41.998997996 81% => OK
Nominalization: 12.0 8.3376753507 144% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1800.0 1615.20841683 111% => OK
No of words: 298.0 315.596192385 94% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 6.04026845638 5.12529762239 118% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.15483772266 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.29504638867 2.80592935109 117% => OK
Unique words: 206.0 176.041082164 117% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.691275167785 0.561755894193 123% => OK
syllable_count: 554.4 506.74238477 109% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.9 1.60771543086 118% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 5.43587174349 18% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 24.0 20.2975951904 118% => OK
Sentence length SD: 64.0994778103 49.4020404114 130% => OK
Chars per sentence: 150.0 106.682146367 141% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.8333333333 20.7667163134 120% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.16666666667 7.06120827912 130% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.260048938845 0.244688304435 106% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0782356744999 0.084324248473 93% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0428391013116 0.0667982634062 64% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.123074562043 0.151304729494 81% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0719191856198 0.056905535591 126% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 19.4 13.0946893788 148% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 21.74 50.2224549098 43% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 16.2 11.3001002004 143% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 18.05 12.4159519038 145% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.55 8.58950901804 123% => OK
difficult_words: 108.0 78.4519038076 138% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.5 9.78957915832 148% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.1190380762 115% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.