Nowadays sports is a big business with high earnings for professional sports people and companies involved both financially and other ways Is this a positive or negative development for sports

Nowadays, sports are big business for sportspeople and companies, while it will bring more money for developments and unethical processes. I will explain both sides of development and why I think it creates a positive impact.

To embarks with, the biggest drawback of this development is the high price of tickets. When a particular sport is more popular in the country, people who involve in the sports charge more fees. It was collected mainly from fans. Secondly, some people play a gamble in it by betting on teams, which led them to negative consequences. For instance, In India, cricket is the most popular game, millions of people love to watch it in the stadium. This has resulted in a hike in the ticket rate. Hence, the more games become popular, the more crime and rate of passes rise.

On the other hand, it will bring several benefits. Firstly, if sports clubs or teams have more money, they invest their incomes gently in developing their facilities and hiring more young players for the future. This leads many youngsters who have interests in sports toward to better places for learning new skills. For example, all football clubs in Spain had strong financial support, they invested drastically to build training and service centers for young players and their future. Therefore, the more money the sports clubs have, the more they hire new players and provide full training.

In conclusion, the popularity of sports brings money. Although it will increase ticket prices and crime rates, it trains new adults for the future and builds new facilities. In my words, despite having some demerits, its benefits are superior from future perspectives.

Votes
Average: 6.1 (1 vote)

Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, firstly, hence, if, second, secondly, so, therefore, while, for example, for instance, i think, in conclusion, on the other hand

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 13.1623246493 46% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 22.0 24.0651302605 91% => OK
Preposition: 31.0 41.998997996 74% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.3376753507 36% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1400.0 1615.20841683 87% => OK
No of words: 276.0 315.596192385 87% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.07246376812 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.07593519647 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.53521718832 2.80592935109 90% => OK
Unique words: 166.0 176.041082164 94% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.601449275362 0.561755894193 107% => OK
syllable_count: 418.5 506.74238477 83% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 5.43587174349 166% => OK
Article: 6.0 2.52805611222 237% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 16.0721442886 106% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.2975951904 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 36.8589380596 49.4020404114 75% => OK
Chars per sentence: 82.3529411765 106.682146367 77% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.2352941176 20.7667163134 78% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.94117647059 7.06120827912 112% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.323350647557 0.244688304435 132% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.094939635727 0.084324248473 113% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0753867548625 0.0667982634062 113% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.191985846025 0.151304729494 127% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0685437494834 0.056905535591 120% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.6 13.0946893788 81% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 63.7 50.2224549098 127% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.4 11.3001002004 74% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.83 12.4159519038 95% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.66 8.58950901804 101% => OK
difficult_words: 74.0 78.4519038076 94% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 9.78957915832 72% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.1190380762 83% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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