It is believed that due to the modernization of medical technology, the average life of people is increasing from few years. The upcoming paragraphs will discuss the public opinion on its positive and negative sides. However; I agree that ageing people are the assets for all in society.
Firstly, nowadays people live healthy, happier and longer life which is the result of advanced medical care. For example, many people died in early age due to diseases like tuberculosis, pneumonia, cancer etc in my grandfather’s time but today that diseases can be cured and people can live longer.
Secondly, older people have much more knowledge and experience which is the great asset for any organization or country. For example, Most of the woman wants to have their operation with the senior surgeon than the juniors because of their experience and adequate knowledge of the subject.
As every coin has its two sides, its negative impact on society also can’t be ignored. It is undeniable that when people get older, they need more attention and care; in addition, they will be sicker and frequently hospitalized. The greater the hospital higher the bill amount which will ultimately affect any individual’s economic and mental health.
In conclusion, it is no doubt that technological advancement in the medical sector has stretched the life span of people however there is some black area which cannot be ignored.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 218, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: However,
...ion on its positive and negative sides. However; I agree that ageing people are the ass...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, however, if, second, secondly, so, for example, in addition, in conclusion, no doubt
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 17.0 24.0651302605 71% => OK
Preposition: 21.0 41.998997996 50% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1194.0 1615.20841683 74% => OK
No of words: 231.0 315.596192385 73% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.16883116883 5.12529762239 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.89854898053 4.20363070211 93% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.75700144209 2.80592935109 98% => OK
Unique words: 144.0 176.041082164 82% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.623376623377 0.561755894193 111% => OK
syllable_count: 381.6 506.74238477 75% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 16.0721442886 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 37.01686013 49.4020404114 75% => OK
Chars per sentence: 108.545454545 106.682146367 102% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.0 20.7667163134 101% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.0909090909 7.06120827912 143% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.230915710096 0.244688304435 94% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0857779402504 0.084324248473 102% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0436266260628 0.0667982634062 65% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.120147327514 0.151304729494 79% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0493839193839 0.056905535591 87% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.4 13.0946893788 102% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 41.7 50.2224549098 83% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 11.3001002004 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.71 12.4159519038 102% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.33 8.58950901804 109% => OK
difficult_words: 68.0 78.4519038076 87% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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