It is concerned that the proportion of people catching obesity is globally increasing while the rate of health and fitness witnesses a decline trend in comparison with the previous generation. In this essay, I intend to explore the sources of these problems along with some justifiable solutions to it.
Chief among the cause of these problems is the modern lifestyle. Nowadays, physical education was replaced by the sedentary lifestyle such as sitting in front of computer all day. Along with the fastest development of fast food industry in this era, people tend to use with convenient food instead of nutritious one. As a result, those two reasons create harmful impact as the steady plunge of people ‘s health.
In order to deal with deteriorating of public health in relation to weight, physical exercises play a role as the possible solution by taking a long term approach. Firstly, in order to solve the problem of imbalanced fitness, simple exercises should be encouraged and advertised largely in community. For instance, only 10 minutes each day, people could build a healthy lifestyle through doing beneficial activities such as jogging or jumping rope. Secondly, the government should pay attention about counteracting the rapid growth of junk food industry. In this case, policy of controlling the numerous number of fast food brand as well as the contribution of companies ‘s factories should be utilize.
In conclusion, this is clearly a problem of such complexity that no solution is likely in the short term. However, I believe that the measures outlined above would constitute a good first step.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, firstly, however, if, second, secondly, so, well, while, for instance, in conclusion, such as, as a result, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 13.1623246493 61% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 10.4138276553 29% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 3.0 7.30460921844 41% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 14.0 24.0651302605 58% => OK
Preposition: 42.0 41.998997996 100% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 8.3376753507 132% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1374.0 1615.20841683 85% => OK
No of words: 262.0 315.596192385 83% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.24427480916 5.12529762239 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.02323427807 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.80434369679 2.80592935109 100% => OK
Unique words: 166.0 176.041082164 94% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.63358778626 0.561755894193 113% => OK
syllable_count: 424.8 506.74238477 84% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 33.2661848317 49.4020404114 67% => OK
Chars per sentence: 105.692307692 106.682146367 99% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.1538461538 20.7667163134 97% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.0 7.06120827912 142% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.165481116042 0.244688304435 68% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0529306471024 0.084324248473 63% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0382274225971 0.0667982634062 57% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0910050481923 0.151304729494 60% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0323122481853 0.056905535591 57% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.3 13.0946893788 102% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 51.18 50.2224549098 102% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.11 12.4159519038 106% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.33 8.58950901804 109% => OK
difficult_words: 78.0 78.4519038076 99% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 9.78957915832 123% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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