In the present day, along with the development of urbanization in many nations around the world, housing issues are drawing the attention of numerous people globally. It is said that more and more young generations still stay under the same roof with their families even when they have been stabled and matured enough. While some people think this trend has a bad influence on different aspects of life, others claim that it could be a positive side. Therefore, this has been an endless controversial problem; however, from my point of view, I wholeheartedly agree with the latter argument.
On the one hand, the young can be isolated from freedom, adventure life or especially chance to meet people cominge from any walk of life is a piece of obvious evidence for others to defend their view. It is commonly accepted that living with family also brings plenty of pressure result from not only parents always dramatically judge and criticize almost everything in their eyes and but also sibling rivalry is a significant obstacle.
On the other hand, there are two primary points which should be taken into account. First and foremost, it is undeniable that sharing the house with family or even relatives may improve all members close-knit and more daily interaction such as extended families. In addition to this, there is no doubt that people can save a lot of money for accommodation in particular. According to the growth growing economy, the cost of living and housing is raisinged seriously, many lower-income people admit that to afford to or purchase a flat or a house is out of their ability.
To conclude, it is my strong belief that living with parents has numerous optimistic aspects in general. I, therefore, highly recommend that the awareness of accommodation should be enhanced in the contemporary world. If this recommendation is carried out, the development of civilized human society will be comprehensive.
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, however, if, may, so, still, therefore, while, in addition, in general, in particular, no doubt, such as, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 19.0 13.1623246493 144% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 25.0 24.0651302605 104% => OK
Preposition: 42.0 41.998997996 100% => OK
Nominalization: 12.0 8.3376753507 144% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1613.0 1615.20841683 100% => OK
No of words: 318.0 315.596192385 101% => OK
Chars per words: 5.07232704403 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.22286093782 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.81074558297 2.80592935109 100% => OK
Unique words: 194.0 176.041082164 110% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.610062893082 0.561755894193 109% => OK
syllable_count: 515.7 506.74238477 102% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 8.0 4.76152304609 168% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 24.0 20.2975951904 118% => OK
Sentence length SD: 44.4114703452 49.4020404114 90% => OK
Chars per sentence: 124.076923077 106.682146367 116% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.4615384615 20.7667163134 118% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.8461538462 7.06120827912 154% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.159279691767 0.244688304435 65% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0509660049244 0.084324248473 60% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0599014198378 0.0667982634062 90% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.090742902124 0.151304729494 60% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0358160039839 0.056905535591 63% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.7 13.0946893788 112% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 47.12 50.2224549098 94% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 11.3001002004 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.42 12.4159519038 100% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.9 8.58950901804 104% => OK
difficult_words: 82.0 78.4519038076 105% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 9.78957915832 143% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.1190380762 115% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.