Many folks hold that children would tend to be self centred if they would be given the liberty to make decisions over daily choices like food, clothes and entertainment. However, others believe that decision-making at an early age should be allowed as this would affect them. Here, I believe that it is vital to make choices and enough rope should be given to offsprings with the help of parents because of the reasons discussed above.
Having the chance to decide over petite daily things is important as it is crucial for children and they gain self-esteem. Firstly, giving young one the opportunity to decide over matters which affects them can help them out to learn a significant skill of decision-making. This is an important soft skill of 21st century and is highly demanded. Therefore, learning it wisely from an early age help them grow. Secondly, it helps toddlers to become independent and not rely on parents every time. This is mainly because while making such choices they should be made realise that they are going to be held responsible for it. Therefore, it's essential for them to do it.
On the other hand, some individuals have the opinion that children being allowed to make such small decision early on can be resulted in two infants becoming selfish individuals later in their lives. The key reason why they think this is so is that most parents these days tend to spoil their children by providing them with the hard cash and not being involved and interfering the decision made by them. As a result, young ones do not comprehend and weigh up pros and cons of making these choices. Hence, later they may become self-centred individuals. For this reason, parents should always be there to correct the wrongdoings such as making wrong decision at some point of their children .
In conclusion, although that's true that children can become selfish at times when they have to make choices over daily matters, this problem can be solved by parents always been there to correct them and hence they can become non self centred.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, firstly, hence, however, if, may, second, secondly, so, therefore, while, in conclusion, such as, as a result, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 21.0 13.1623246493 160% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 13.0 7.85571142285 165% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 42.0 24.0651302605 175% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 44.0 41.998997996 105% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 8.3376753507 12% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1702.0 1615.20841683 105% => OK
No of words: 350.0 315.596192385 111% => OK
Chars per words: 4.86285714286 5.12529762239 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.32530772707 4.20363070211 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.53013910351 2.80592935109 90% => OK
Unique words: 182.0 176.041082164 103% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.52 0.561755894193 93% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 511.2 506.74238477 101% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 56.4684300627 49.4020404114 114% => OK
Chars per sentence: 106.375 106.682146367 100% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.875 20.7667163134 105% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.4375 7.06120827912 119% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 8.0 5.01903807615 159% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.166073395179 0.244688304435 68% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0587557898959 0.084324248473 70% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0557816861582 0.0667982634062 84% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.105892701958 0.151304729494 70% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0627509475237 0.056905535591 110% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.4 13.0946893788 95% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 58.62 50.2224549098 117% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 11.3001002004 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.91 12.4159519038 88% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.61 8.58950901804 89% => OK
difficult_words: 65.0 78.4519038076 83% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 9.78957915832 107% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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