In the contemporary lifetime, people have to cope with plenty of issues and risks happened that leads to unexpected circumstances. It is to say whether they should accept the reality of money deficit or unsatisfactory job, for instance. This essay will make clear my point of view and direct proper behaviors for such these situations.
In terms of giving up everything, it seems not to be appropriate for others when first heard because of general conciousness of motivation and moving forward does not allow them to think in this way. Nevertheless, in case of things are too harsh and difficult to be resolved, we have no way but to abandon old plans and start up with brighter direction to go, which is also a suitable manner in actual life. Taking quitting a stressful job as an example, there are many people do have to resign their current occupations in favor of searching for new vacancies as they do not want to suffer from old depressed working environment anymore.
On the flip side, if the bad situation is still under control, it is no use constantly accepting it as if there would be no solution at all. During the progress of individuals, there are certainly various challenges that come to and require them to have bravery to deal with and overcome with more spectacular results. Therefore, before thinking of putting problems away, we should consider other relevant factors which can change the negative scenario, then transform it into opportunity. If we are lucky, the recent bad stuff will probably become a decisive moment to help our lives much better in silver lining.
In conclusion, the dependence of real circumstances decides people's behaviors. But no matter what the choice is, everyone has to stand up again in order to build up a more positive life for themselves.
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, if, nevertheless, so, still, then, therefore, as to, for instance, in conclusion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 21.0 24.0651302605 87% => OK
Preposition: 51.0 41.998997996 121% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1493.0 1615.20841683 92% => OK
No of words: 305.0 315.596192385 97% => OK
Chars per words: 4.89508196721 5.12529762239 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.17902490978 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.80354902349 2.80592935109 100% => OK
Unique words: 204.0 176.041082164 116% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.668852459016 0.561755894193 119% => OK
syllable_count: 473.4 506.74238477 93% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 25.0 20.2975951904 123% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 45.6605835364 49.4020404114 92% => OK
Chars per sentence: 124.416666667 106.682146367 117% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.4166666667 20.7667163134 122% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.16666666667 7.06120827912 116% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.135414890651 0.244688304435 55% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0443621913881 0.084324248473 53% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0390301465342 0.0667982634062 58% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0728441303781 0.151304729494 48% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0472239998722 0.056905535591 83% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.4 13.0946893788 110% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 46.1 50.2224549098 92% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.0 11.3001002004 115% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.44 12.4159519038 92% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.97 8.58950901804 104% => OK
difficult_words: 79.0 78.4519038076 101% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 10.1190380762 119% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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