One opinion that is widely believed is that such professionals as doctors and engineers should serve the country they accomplish their academic achievement. Others believe that these people can travel anywhere they want to perform their job. In my perspective, it is their right that people can work in the place they wish to.
On the one hand, working in the same place where doctors or engineers were trained is reasonable as they can serve the best of the knowledge they comprehend here. It is because each country has its particular circumstances that only people who live or study about it can understand. Take architecture as an example, every country owns different ground conditions, and architects need to be well aware of before designing anything, not to mention building anything.
On the other hand, I personally believe that it is human rights that anyone can work anywhere they want no matter what their professional is. As long as they do not involve in any work that contradicts moral standards, then they are free to go. Moreover, many young students studying abroad dream of coming to their hometown to dedicate their knowledge to local residences. Also, they are preventing brain drain, which is a rising problem for several governments, including Vietnam. I assume that is the nicest gesture of a brilliant person can do for their community.
In conclusion, although serving in the country where they were trained can provide these people with opportunities to apply most of their understanding, professions like doctors should be given the right to choose where to perform their jobs, and I think other people should respect their decision.
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, if, moreover, so, then, well, i think, in conclusion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 13.1623246493 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 7.85571142285 140% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 10.4138276553 48% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 14.0 7.30460921844 192% => OK
Pronoun: 40.0 24.0651302605 166% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 28.0 41.998997996 67% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 8.3376753507 24% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1393.0 1615.20841683 86% => OK
No of words: 273.0 315.596192385 87% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.10256410256 5.12529762239 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.06481385082 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.76306560267 2.80592935109 98% => OK
Unique words: 158.0 176.041082164 90% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.578754578755 0.561755894193 103% => OK
syllable_count: 424.8 506.74238477 84% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 57.4823644453 49.4020404114 116% => OK
Chars per sentence: 116.083333333 106.682146367 109% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.75 20.7667163134 110% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.41666666667 7.06120827912 91% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.46026924341 0.244688304435 188% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.165771758903 0.084324248473 197% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.106215045502 0.0667982634062 159% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.295227059139 0.151304729494 195% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0895128893088 0.056905535591 157% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.0 13.0946893788 107% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 49.15 50.2224549098 98% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.6 12.4159519038 101% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.55 8.58950901804 100% => OK
difficult_words: 66.0 78.4519038076 84% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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