We live in an age when many of us are using the internet to update information,
look up documents, etc. Therefore, a majority of people suppose that we do not
need printed paper newspapers. I partially agree with this view and my reason
will be explained in the following paragraphs.
On the one hand, in more and more modern society, almost everyone uses the
internet to update daily information rather than read newspapers. The reason is
because reading online newspapers can keep up to date with the latest news in a
very short period of time and people can read anywhere as long as there is a
device that can go online. In addition, the use of social media to read news is
completely free, while if people want to read a newspaper they like, they will
have to spend money to buy it. Perhaps, using the internet will be more
economically beneficial for people because they wouldn't have to spend money
on newspapers anymore.
On the other hand, although the new newspaper is available for longer because it
must be carefully censored before publishing, the news is much more accurate
and reliable. Meanwhile, there are uncensored tabloids online, so such news can
be false and unreliable. Besides that, I think that most of the old people will often
prefer to read newspapers because they do not know how to use social networks
and using paper newspapers will be less harmful to their eyes.
To conclusion, I believe that printed paper newspapers will always be published
because there are many people who still need
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 6, column 78, Rule ID: REASON_IS_BECAUSE[1]
Message: Probably an incorrect phrase. Use 'the reason 'is that''.
Suggestion: is that
...rather than read newspapers. The reason is because reading online newspapers can keep up t...
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Line 8, column 12, Rule ID: PERIOD_OF_TIME[1]
Message: Use simply 'period'.
Suggestion: period
...e with the latest news in a very short period of time and people can read anywhere as long as...
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Line 13, column 1, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Economically
...aps, using the internet will be more economically beneficial for people because they woul...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
besides, if, look, so, still, therefore, while, i think, in addition, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 13.0 7.85571142285 165% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 20.0 24.0651302605 83% => OK
Preposition: 32.0 41.998997996 76% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.3376753507 36% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1299.0 1615.20841683 80% => OK
No of words: 264.0 315.596192385 84% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.92045454545 5.12529762239 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.03089032464 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.6154884742 2.80592935109 93% => OK
Unique words: 146.0 176.041082164 83% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.55303030303 0.561755894193 98% => OK
syllable_count: 410.4 506.74238477 81% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 16.0721442886 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 24.0 20.2975951904 118% => OK
Sentence length SD: 40.7230111407 49.4020404114 82% => OK
Chars per sentence: 118.090909091 106.682146367 111% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.0 20.7667163134 116% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.90909090909 7.06120827912 112% => OK
Paragraphs: 21.0 4.38176352705 479% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 3.4128256513 176% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.209422493293 0.244688304435 86% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0949724382639 0.084324248473 113% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.116666854252 0.0667982634062 175% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0633737011516 0.151304729494 42% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0632575403631 0.056905535591 111% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.7 13.0946893788 105% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 47.12 50.2224549098 94% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 11.3001002004 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.55 12.4159519038 93% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.76 8.58950901804 90% => OK
difficult_words: 49.0 78.4519038076 62% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 9.78957915832 107% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.1190380762 115% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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